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November 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I loved it. Please continue
update soon
update soon
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November 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
beautiful!!!! simply beautiful...
you must make this into a story...please, you have to!
its so bloody brilliant!
you must make this into a story...please, you have to!
its so bloody brilliant!
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November 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Yes, write another chapter, at least make it a 2 part one shot. Its really good.
Dawna Sama
Dawna Sama
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November 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
That was too hot not to have another chapter following it and this wasnt even a full lemon LOl wow.
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November 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Please hell yes! make another godamn chapter...this is so hot! you are very talented!
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November 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This was a really good story i haven't read anything like it and i love it, i love your other stories as well but this one had that aspect of something else i think that you could do something really good with this
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November 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I love it. His call wasn't a request. Now give her some backbone!!!
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November 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Ahh noo.. you have to write more.
like wow
here.. i'm reviewing...i'm reviewing
PLEASE write more
don't make me cry.. *sniffles*
must.. read... more.. lols
really good job btw
like wow
here.. i'm reviewing...i'm reviewing
PLEASE write more
don't make me cry.. *sniffles*
must.. read... more.. lols
really good job btw
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November 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Very nice :)
I don't know what to say that I haven't told you before. You are an amazing writer, and your descriptions are very alive, I can really picture everything in my mind.
Keep up the good work ^_^
I don't know what to say that I haven't told you before. You are an amazing writer, and your descriptions are very alive, I can really picture everything in my mind.
Keep up the good work ^_^
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November 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
cool.