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Please don't let him rape her! I hope she zaps him with her you know what!

I love the story you have started here. I really hope you continue you because I would love to see it finished.

(But, I would like to tell you that you have been using the wrong there/their. 'Their' is the possessive form of they. 'There' should be used in the other times. Also, start new paragraphs between each speaker. It cuts down on the confusion of speaker and makes it easier on the reader. Please don't take offense; I'm trying to help in my own English teacher way.)

I'll be watching out for your next chapter! I hope Sessy gets there before Naraku finishes his plan.

Good God, i love this story!! Woot! Oh please update soon!!

Please Update Soon

What an evil place to leave the story! I like it.

Can't wait for the next chapter.

Until we meet again.

man i hope he gets there to...please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please update soon i would love to read more ... later for now

angel

I am enjoying your story. Please update again soon. Could you email me when you update again?

Until we meet again.

What an asshole! I hope she comes up with a way to purify him just by him touching her. Kind of like a spiritual chastity belt!

Hi Hi!!
This is getting really intersting! ;D
Poor Kags... I hope Sess can save before something even more bad happens to her... and that she won't be miss-treated if Naraku's sent is too much for any of the inu brothers o.O
Hope see you soon
Bye byes

Naraku is SO evil! Wanting them to sense her arousal and orgasm when they arrive to rescue her -- that's a new high in lows. Interesting about the jewel. What kind of plan could she have in mind? What about the potion? Who will find her first? What will his reaction be? Can't wait to find out!