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for Love Potion

by chicke222

schedule February 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh, that is so great! Naraku is purified, Sesshy tells her that she is his, she tells him she loves him, now all thats needed is a nice lemon or lime, more lomons and limes, and then puppies!
I am sorry it took me so long to review, work has been very demanding, and have to say, I'm happy I took the time to check stuff and review today!
Up-date as soon as possible!
TTYL;
megan
person cocoke5
schedule February 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
very good chapter and can not wait for the next chapte of the story and see what happn next up date soon
person Crysan
schedule February 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
AWESOME!!!! this story gets better every time I read it! Update again soon!!!!
person madmiko
schedule February 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Aw! What a nice scene there at the end. Poor Kagome, having to go through all that. Does she realize that the potion must have taken effect? Does Sesshoumaru? Do they care? Can't wait for the next chapter!
schedule February 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
hey there!

i sent you a response to your e-mail. this is a good story but you have to watch malapropisms and homophones, i'll help you with that. looking forward to hearing from you again, then we'll get to work!
ginny
schedule February 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
plzzz write more
schedule February 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
hurry up and update it please this was so awesome
schedule February 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
please update soon.
person cocoke5
schedule February 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
wow the story is real good and can not wait f or the next chapter ofthe story and see what happen when the poish take affte on kegoma and she see sess . good luck.
schedule February 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
write more plzz


take care