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huh...

miroku likes kagome and sango wants inu?


thats' lame.

LAME you suck. check your spelling.. and grammar...

then get a reality check. these two don't work. it still amazes me how people can so cluelessly put two people together whom have abosfuckinglutely NO chemestry with each other.

okay, It felt as if, you were jumping tooooo quickly. I really rarely see this pairing.. and obviously for good reason, I don't understand how people do that... I myself usually strictly write to the chemestry that is presented to me by the Magnaka Rumiko takahashi but... thats my writing.

I would check this over for starters because you do have some pretty confusing errors... make your thoughts clearer beFORE you post, take the time to really think about what you want to write before you actually type it out.

^_^

and have fun. That's what matters most.

I'm sorry you think that... I didn't say your story sucked.. unlike the other two reveiws you seemed to have gotten... if i thought it did i wouldn't be coming back to read more... i wouldn't have even bothered to look and tell you that you had any errors.

SPEAKING of which you spelled pathetic wrong.

have you even read any of the stuff i've written?

Might wanna give that a whourl before you say such words.

kudasai.

Ja ne

Heather.

and if you didn't read that i wrote USUALLY then you should reread what i wrote.

Don't be so hostile. take your reveiws as they are... you are the writer.. there should be no reason for you to have to explain yourself if you truly feel the reveiwer is not intune with writing anyways. Your responses shouldn't be that way.. it just makes you look like you are arguing to defend yourself.. which ultimately comes off as... you are insecurein your writing.