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I lurved it. ^_^ So sad ya can't continue it though.

I really appreciate that you've taken this risk to write an alternate pairing. Kag/Mir pairings are my guiltly pleasure, but they are rarely well written in that they rarely have a plot. That's why I'm so happy to have found your story, you actually seem to have thought things out and made a somewhat logical story out of it. Thank you for doing that! I have to say that I do have a little bit of a problem following your story. Maybe it's just me, but sometimes when you write "him" or "her" I don't know exactly who you're talking about. Maybe I'm not reading close enough. Obviously, I don't want you to write the character names out all the time, but maybe more often would be helpful. Just a thought. Otherwise, I really hope you won't let a few idiots stop you from writing. You have put this story under the appropriate section, so I really don't see why they're flaming you. The story is clearly going to be a Kagome/Miroku fic, so why read it if you have a problem with it? I hope you will see that their problems for the most part seem to have nothing to do with your story, but just the pairing in particular. That's their problem. I certainly don't blame you for speaking up, I would have to. Anyway, I'm rambling, but really, your writing is very good and the story looks to be incredibly promising. I look forward to what you have in store for us. Thank you for being bold and writing this pairing. I've really thought about doing it, but haven't because I'm afraid of the flames that you've gotten and I can't come up with a very good plot line, so congrats on being brave and creative!

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I really like this story although you need to work on your spelling and grammar a bit. Keep up the good work!!!!!

i love this parring and i think that you have a good
start on the story but it dose need a little more work.
update soon!

i love this story there is not enough MirokuxKagome out there keep it up.

and to all the dumb fucks flaming, flameing the story is pointless writeing shit about other peoples storys dosen't make yours any better, if you don't like a story don't read it.DUMB ASSES!

post a new chapter soon, and don't pay attinchen to all the bad reviews.

HAHAHAHA THIS IS FUNNY ACTUALLY. I LIKE THIS STORY. I HOPE YOU KEEP IT UP. I HAVE NEVER READ THIS PAIRING BEFORE, I ALWAYS THOUGHT IT WOULD BE TOO WEIRD. BUT YOU KNOW IT'S REALLY ACTUALLY GOOD. I THINK THEY WOULD WORK OUT FOR REALZ. BUT HEY WHAT DO I KNOW LOL. ANY WAYS DON'T LET THE OTHER PPL GET YOU DOWN... THEY DON'T KNOW ANYTHING AT ALL. NO IMAGINATION AT ALL. WHO CARES THAT YOU HAVE MISPELLED WORDS AND ALL THAT.. NOBODYS PERFECT. GEEZ YOU WOULD THINK THEY WOULD KNOW ENOUGH TO JUST SAY SOMETHING NICE FOR ONCE. LOL SORRY I DIDN'T MEAN TO TYPE TOO MUCH. I HAVE MY OWN STORIES TOO. I HAVE A SESS/KAG AND THEN A NEW KOUGA/KAG PAIRING STORY. LOL. IF YOU READ "LOVE ME FOR ENTERNITY" AND "KAGOME'S NAUGHTY DREAMS" PLEASE LEAVE A REVIEW. THOSE ARE MINE. I THINK THEY ARE GOOD FOR SOMEONE WHO HAS NEVER SEEN INUYASHA BEFORE. I'VE ONLY SEEN THE MOVIES 2 AND 3. THAT'S ABOUT IT... AND FROM WHAT I'VE READ AND BEEN TOLD ABOUT IT. WELL I HOPE YOU READ THEM AND REVIEW THEM PLEASE I WOULD LOVE TO KNOW WHAT YOU THINK ABOUT THEM. ANY WAYS GOODLUCK WRITING THIS STORY. I REALLY DO LIKE IT. I WANNA KNOW WHAT HAPPENS NEXT SO PLEASE PLEASE UPDATE SOON. I GIVE IT A 10 CUZ IT HAS IMAGINATION AND IT'S CUTE. LOL BYE FOR NOW.

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Fuck those reviewers. I happen to think Miroku and Kagome would have great chemistry if Inuyasha wasn't in the picture. I think the story is good enough that whatever grammar spelling errors were there didn't detract from the actual story. AND I think you're doing a good job. Once again, they can go fuck themselves.

Please continue. There isn't enough Kagome and Miroku stories out there and I like this pairing.