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February 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Hey, I love this story! it has a great plot line! I do think that the chapters are a little short, and please update soon if I have to wait a long time for an update I don't want to read the chapter of a story I don't remember. Keep up the good work!
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September 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
brilliant cant wait for more!!!
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June 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
ok I cant take it, PLEASE write more!!!! you caught me. I love what you have written.
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May 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I like your story. I really hope you update sometime soon. Great job!!!!
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March 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
i really like this story! Keep it up! I can't wait to read more about it. what's this plan? and when will kag and roku realize they feel strongly for each other? silly people! just say it already! gah!
love the story, keep it up!
love the story, keep it up!
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January 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
so far so good. i like what u doing it's nice and easy so far. hope to get some real lemons soon or some fluff.
update soon
update soon
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January 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hey this story is pure genius I don't care what the reviews say and neither should you. Do not let them affect your genius
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January 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
hurry up and post again i like thsi story plz and i do like your writing abut you could make they chappys a lil longer
thanks your fan
sean moses
thanks your fan
sean moses
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December 15, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Nice start to the story so far. Like "Someone Else", Miroku/Kagome is one of my guilty pleasures. I agree that it is sometimes difficult to determine who you're referring to when you say "he" or "she". There are also some spelling and grammatical errors, but they're not too bad.
And you should definitely ignore those flamers. They're, quite simply, morons for even looking at a section devoted to a pairing they don't like, and they're probably just looking to stir up trouble, anyway.
As for the pairing being unrealistic, it is entirely possible. Incredibly unlikely in canon, (where Takahashi rules the roost) but possible none the less. At the very least it's far more likely than pairing Kagome with any other male in canon. (Excluding, of course, Inuyasha and Kouga.) And you know that he would flirt shamelessly with Kagome if it weren't for the double threat of Sango and Inuyasha. =P
And you should definitely ignore those flamers. They're, quite simply, morons for even looking at a section devoted to a pairing they don't like, and they're probably just looking to stir up trouble, anyway.
As for the pairing being unrealistic, it is entirely possible. Incredibly unlikely in canon, (where Takahashi rules the roost) but possible none the less. At the very least it's far more likely than pairing Kagome with any other male in canon. (Excluding, of course, Inuyasha and Kouga.) And you know that he would flirt shamelessly with Kagome if it weren't for the double threat of Sango and Inuyasha. =P
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December 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Fuck those bitches who can't see the Miroku/Kagome pairing. There aren't a lot of people who are open to this, although it's so feasible. Have you read any of Sandra E.'s works on FF.net? She's a great Miroku/Kagome writer.
Your story has potential, and it makes me mad to see the hecklers (who have no decent fics of their own) flame this story. It's not perfect but at least you're trying and that's what counts. Hang in there. Just write your story for fans like me who like reading it. That'll shut them up.
Your story has potential, and it makes me mad to see the hecklers (who have no decent fics of their own) flame this story. It's not perfect but at least you're trying and that's what counts. Hang in there. Just write your story for fans like me who like reading it. That'll shut them up.