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December 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
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December 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
AWSOME ☻ (like all of your stories:) Cant wait to see next chappy ☻
PLEASE UPDATE SOON will ya ☻
YOU ROCK ☻
LOTS OF HAPPY FACES FOR YOU ☻☻☻☻☻☻☻
PLEASE UPDATE SOON will ya ☻
YOU ROCK ☻
LOTS OF HAPPY FACES FOR YOU ☻☻☻☻☻☻☻
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November 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
ohhhhhhhhh how evil of you leaving a cliffy. this is really good, i liked how you betrayed ayame as an evil bitch too, though i felt sorry for kouga for what he went through. as for kagome delivering kikyos twins i thought that was rather sweet.
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November 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
o.o;;;
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November 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wow I loved it wow I hope you like UPDATE SOON I mean wow awesome job like really your great at this aren't you wow i'm shocked on how good you wrote this I luv it wow you're awesome wow this is like wow!!!
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November 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I want MORE MORE MORE. Give it up already you big meanie. lol. Update soon and I mean like sometime today. Bye for now. ^_^
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November 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
okay. The writing was smooth, pace of the words was nice, although the pace of the story was unexpected. like you said, fast. I think I wouldn't have an issue with fast if...hmmm, maybe more if they didn't...explain everything to each other, if that makes sense? ya know, like we all know they are thinking these things, and we want them to eventually know that they were thinking these things, but when we explain stuff to each other, even in moments of great stress, I think the explanations usually don't explain everything, ya know?
Of course, that could be more that my explanations aren't that informative, heh heh.
Still, I'm curious to see where it's going if this is already happening at this point. What is going to to happen, wonder wonder. :-)
Oh, and I like how you've been doing kikyou and Inuyasha - their resolution and their characters both. Also, I like how you've dealt with Kagome's feelings for Inuyasha. So often, they get brushed aside in the fic, and that just cheapens her character, IMO, because it makes her seem a lot less devoted or fickle than I always perceived her as.
Of course, that could be more that my explanations aren't that informative, heh heh.
Still, I'm curious to see where it's going if this is already happening at this point. What is going to to happen, wonder wonder. :-)
Oh, and I like how you've been doing kikyou and Inuyasha - their resolution and their characters both. Also, I like how you've dealt with Kagome's feelings for Inuyasha. So often, they get brushed aside in the fic, and that just cheapens her character, IMO, because it makes her seem a lot less devoted or fickle than I always perceived her as.
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November 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I loveit! Please update soon.
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November 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I like that pairing. I also like this story so far. The next chapter should be longer though. The name is cute too by the way lol. Great job. Keep it up and update soon please.
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November 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I love it!!! lol. Keep it up and update like today, you big meanie lol.