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November 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
cant wait to see what happens
update soon
update soon
schedule
November 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Nice start but I advice you to research Japanese before you use the words.
Osuwari, not "Owusari".
It's painful, made me wince when I read it.
Osuwari, not "Owusari".
It's painful, made me wince when I read it.
schedule
November 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wow this is pretty cool so far keep up the good work!!!
schedule
November 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
wow im liking the story so i hope you can update soon cause i would love to read more.