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dude what i wouldn't give to be in kagome's place! i love it please up date soon!

I've just finished rereading this story for the fifth time, I just love it. I can't wait until your able to update it.

Please update soon!

Well now that I have the right ID for you & can find this again, I'm rereading this for at least the 2nd time & have a minor correction for at least chapter 1, women is plural meaning more than 1 so you need to change that to woman singular when talking about only 1 female. Hope this helps & I'm looking forward to a new chapter, hopefully soon.

i loved it cant wait for the next chapters

This isn't a bad start. I can definitely see this story being continued. ...As long as you clean it up, that is. Regardless if this is your first fanfic or not, you should proof read (spelling, grammar, sentence structure, etc.). The words are a bit jumbled, but that idea is there.

that story is bumping rally love the story i can' t wait until u update the story my friends really love it too since they don't have a computer they come over and they really love your story so keep updating

omg that was a awesome chapter.

Really enjoying this & am hoping for an update kinda soonish.

That was awsome! At first I wasn't going to go to adultfanfiction.net to look for a crossover, because they don't send you an email when people update like mediaminer.org and fanfiction.net do... but I'm glad that I gave it a second thought and allowed myself to induldge in this rare opertunity. Personally I believe that Hiei and Kagome need to "talk", there isn't much that they're doing together except for that one time that she can't even remember, they defenitly need to get to know eachother a bit better, perhaps another mission came up and Hiei stays so that he can look after Kagome, after all they don't want her to be alone.

I dont know what else to say except to keep up the good work,

Yours truely,
~Mari-chan~