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for Mr Bubbles

by bluezinthos

person lexmarks567
schedule December 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Good story keep up the good work.
person InuYoukai
schedule November 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Great Story.. Loved it.
person ecci
schedule November 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
wow that was so cute. i loved it! ^_^ goodjob
person XxSangoxX *not signed in*
schedule November 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I must say, i was MORE than pleased to see that you did not say the word sit ... that you DID imply that when said, he plummets to the ground no matter the phrasing or use.

So many people do that, not realizing that when ever she says sit... no matter what the reason, the beads work.

This was nicely written. Thank you for sharing.
person Pucie
schedule November 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Awww, that was soo sweet!! Kudos, It's a good story, I like how they had such an innocent air about them. . . .nice touch!

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