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January 14, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I love this story can you please continue with this story. Plus can Inuyasha and Kagome get married and have a pup or pups please. Plus can Kikyo be put to rest. Also can Kagome live in Inuyasha's time so that she can become the next priestess please. Please e-mail me back at sarah.zitter@yahoo.com I would like to hear from you when you have the time have a happy 2009 new year please.
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Sarah Zitter
From,
Sarah Zitter
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May 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I love this one shot story. PLEASE can you do a sequel I would love it when Inuyasha and Kagome become mates PLEASE. Plus can you PLEASE put Kikyo to rest and can you PLEASE let Naraku die PLEASE. Plus can Kagome become pregnant with a pup or pups PLEASE so that Inuyasha and Kagome can both be happy PLEASE. PLEASE e-mail me back at sarah.zitter@yahoo.com
From,
Sarah Zitter
From,
Sarah Zitter
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December 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
nice...
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November 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I'm sorry I'm so slow on R/R here. I get to read and not review, then finally remember that I didn't review, lol. I know, I'm lame, sorry. I like your story tho, I really did. I like it when Inu isn't exactly sure on all what he should and shouldn't do, even tho Kagome's not too sure herself, lol. Is this just a one-shot or is there going to be more? Hope so. Thanks for sharing! :D
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November 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Well that story was awesome... I just have ONE pet pieve about it... why is Inuyasha's erection ALWAYS GROWING?!
like... from making out in the bathroom before the shower... till after washing each others hair to walking to her bedroom... that should all be one... not three seperate... be mean and give him a case of blue balls ;)
like... from making out in the bathroom before the shower... till after washing each others hair to walking to her bedroom... that should all be one... not three seperate... be mean and give him a case of blue balls ;)
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November 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
hahahahaha!
I loved it! It was so hot and sexy!
My favorite part is the shower scene, gotta love the shower.
^_^
I just love one-shotters don't you?
I loved it! It was so hot and sexy!
My favorite part is the shower scene, gotta love the shower.
^_^
I just love one-shotters don't you?
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November 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Great one-shot. It was HOT...but sweet at the same time. And you're right about Shippo; he can be quite annoying and nosy sometimes.
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November 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
another great one!!! lol
this is why i love you hun.
keep em crankin... at least you aren't too busy to write. sigh.
soon my lovely... soon.
this is why i love you hun.
keep em crankin... at least you aren't too busy to write. sigh.
soon my lovely... soon.
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November 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Good work! I found it a bit one-sided as far as 'resolution' before the act; Inuyasha is the one that gave Kagome a lot of her insecurities about Kikyou and he never really apologized to HER for treating her badly. It was nice to see Inu finally tell her that he's upset that she doesn't trust him when he tells her what he did with Kikyou, but I would have liked to see him take some responsibility. As far as the lemon itself, things were well written. A bit more surprise or question might have been an asset, but overall it was nicely executed.
Please continue writing! You're an excellent author and I hope to see more from you.
Please continue writing! You're an excellent author and I hope to see more from you.
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November 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
apart from this being absolutely hot! i mean, really scorching, this is also so sweeeeeet! i love,love, love, lurrrr-ve it!