rate_review Reviews

I am really enjoying this story a lot and look forward to reading more. Thanks for the great lemon... (giggle)

What one word could I use to sum up this plot... It would have to be "yum"! ^^ Hehe, that was very well detailed. Thank you for writing it. =3 Keep it up hun.

I absolutely loved this story. I do so hope that you add a few more chapters onto it. You even gave me a few ideas that I just may try out on my husband,too. Oh, these hentai thoughts! He'll never know what he's in for until it's too late. Thank You.

(NICE:) Update Please ^^

Peace And Love *-*

MMMMMMMMOOOOOOOOOOOOOORRRRRRRRRRRREEEEEEEEEEEEEE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Very nice ^-^ more please!

Overall "Romp in the Park" does a good job of keeping the characters, well, in character while running them through scenes that Ms Takahashi may have thought of but would not put into a published story! :) (Though I do wonder sometimes whether some of the better-done hentai doujinshi out there involves the original authors writing under a pen name).
- I do wonder about the "demon moon" thing. Both sets of couples have shown themselves as distinctly jealous types in recurring moments with bushel baskets of insecurity to boot. The interesting dynamic of watching each other is a good plot device to balance that, but you will need to carefully balance that on the first day that both couples have gotten physical with each other (in a big way). I look forward to seeing how you bring the story to a climax (er, conclusion). Thanks!