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for Happy Halloween

by Rebeldedm

person MIKO4EVER
schedule November 19, 2006 at 12:00 AM
That is so sad!U actually made me fell bad 4 kagome.Hope shes ok!And thanx 4 the compliment at the beginin of the chappy.^-^.Srry if i sorta took ur sign.^-^.Again a birdy tolled me and i liked it,no i luv it!Keep ^ the good work!And selina seems like a nice person.I think i've met her before.She goes 2 skool with u dont she.Again a birdy tolled me.I hope u guess who i am soon!Oh yah ur first guess on who i was was wrong.Again a birdy tolled me.
person Megan
schedule November 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Dude, your rushing it. Let it flow and put on the breaks. First off a person in that much pain over a horrifying ordeal such as this isn't going to be very open about it. Second. . . well hell. . . you could have wrote twenty chapters with what you already have written. It's a good plot it just needs to stretched so it doesn't leave us dazzed and sprawled on the floor.
person Breona G.
schedule November 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
man u had me and my ken folk rollin on truth or dare i have to give it up to ya thats good keep up tha good wrok
person MIKO 4EVER
schedule November 12, 2006 at 12:00 AM
OMG!I LOVE THIS STORY!THATS SAD THAT KAGOMES FATHER IS ABUSEIF.THAT MUST REALLY SUCK.LUV UR STORY! GOOD PLOT!I LOVE YASHIE!AND FLUFFY AND RIN MAKE A GOOD COUPLE!SO DOES KOGA AND AYEMIE!PLEASE UPDATE SOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOON!OH YAH!GUESS WHO I AM!
person selina
schedule November 12, 2006 at 12:00 AM
woah...
ur mean!!
y'd u have to stop writing now???


(i was laughing alot knowing u took my oOo and hun)
next ur gonna take my *cough cough*
lol jk
good job
person miss ashley
schedule November 12, 2006 at 12:00 AM
yeah whats up girly. this story rocks. so keep it up. well gotta go for now so update and ill yack at ya some more.
person ASHLEY
schedule November 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
HAHA OKAY THIS IS A LAUGH GIRLY. DANG I'M SCARED TO PLAY TRUTH OR DARE WITH YOU NOW. LOL. I NEEDED TO LAUGH SO THANK YOU. I LOVED THIS CHAPTER SO UPDATE SOON.
person 6angel9
schedule November 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Aww its so cute. update please and thankyou
person NEW BITCH IN TOWN
schedule November 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
WELL I LIKED THAT CHAPPY GIRLY. UPDATE SOON. AND BEFORE YOU EVEN ASK IF I REALLY REALLY LIKED IT IM TELLING YOU NOW THAT I DID. SO THERE. HAHA.
person kireinakao
schedule November 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
you make inuyasha and the others come off as dirt poor, like they might as well be hobos at a soup line waiting for the hand-out when kagome buys them lunch. that's... awkward and it takes away from your story.