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for Happy Halloween

by Rebeldedm

person LIlmamma
schedule November 24, 2017 at 12:00 AM

Please don't take this the wrong way, but the more I read the more confused I get. I feel like I'm reading different stories mashed together.

person LIlmamma
schedule November 23, 2017 at 12:00 AM

Ok I'm confused, in the first chapter you said that Kagome was 17, and then in a flashback I think it was about Kagome and sangos dad about to hit Kagome but hit sango instead you said that sango was 10 and Kagome 9 so I figured that they were a year apart, but in chapter 2(I just finished that one) you said Kagome is 16. Also you made sango seem nice and loving to her sister, but now she's a bitch. Could you please email me at mammawolf247365@yahoo.com and make me not confused.

person LIlmamma
schedule June 15, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I just started reading your story and when I got to chapter ten I was very confused about what was going on. can you please tell me what this chapter is about?
person Lavizzy
schedule December 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
poor kag.
person Suikidoen
schedule January 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
zomg i almost cried it was so ...so...words cannot discribe how much i like this ^^
person ASHLEY
schedule January 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
this is so cute. please update againg. love ya.
person seli
schedule January 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
awww
how SAD!

hurry and write some more!!!
person ASHLEY
schedule January 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Sometime's some of your chapters sound like something out of my stories lol. I liked it though. Do you get some of your stories out of mine??? I'm just wondering. Your my sis so I wouldn't care... any one else I would hurt lol. Good job sweetie. I love you. Take care.
person ASHLEY
schedule December 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I like it but I was wondering something. Doesn't Kouga got a girlfriend, so why would he be dancing like that with Kagome??? What's up with Inuyasha going out with Kikyou right then and stuff too??? I'm just wondering is all. I love you so take care and update soon. Bye for now.
person TapTheMemoryBank
schedule December 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Sweet write more...that was fun.

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