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OMG You captured Sesshoumaru's personality PERFECTLY! I totally could never manage to do that in my story, and finally I gave up and just tacked OOC on it rofl but wow! this is a really great story! Please write more and soon! ^.^ I love it lots!!!

Great story so far! I am interested on see where it goes...

Glad that you finally updated. Liked the second chapter and doing a good job of writing about a young woman's cancer story. Look forward to the next chapter.

This is a one of a kind story..... I applaud you for writing a story such as this..... no one has ever written a story like this and women need to know that there is someone out there who cares..... I feel that your story will touch so many women diagnosed with breast cancer.... It has touched my heart and i don't even has breast cancer but know someone who have breast cancer...Please continue with this wonderful story and once again I as well as other women reading your story applaud you. ^_______^

This sounds to be a great story and really glad what it has to deal with. From this one chapter I have to say that you have a talent for great description, it's told really well and promises to be great....espically when you know who comes in. I do know something and this is just a suggestion you don't have to take it, but if Rin ever finds herself lacking in strength or the courage to do this than have her wear red lipstick. Supposedly the woman who can wear red lipstick are powerful, strong, can withstand anything. I saw a movie that the character was dealing with breast cancer and she seemed alot like your character but she wasn't a red lipstick woman at first she was a lipgloss-girl but through all the trials of having BC and during her surgery she wore red lipstick. The thing is is that red lipstick does make you feel somewhat powerful, I got some today. I'm not trying to say that your making Rin out to be someone who isn't powerful, strong, or can't withstand anything I'm just saying that you could use this to make her stronger, it's her war paint for the battle of her life. It's just a suggestion but I do like what you've got going here and I'll continue to read.

I think you have a really great start there.....I can't wait to see how Sesshomaru fits into her situation....please keep it up!!!!

Not bad for a first fic. If I was you, I would move up the rating to NC-17 since you're going to have a lemon in it. Look forward to the next chapter.

Great start, I'm looking forward to chapter 2!~ B reading U!