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Great story; please continue & finish!!!

Oh please update soon I can't wait to find out what going to happened with Rin and Sesshomaru.

Thank you...thank you ...thank you for the update and not forget about this wonderful story. I'm on fanfiction and deviantart so I'll make sure to favorite you on them to keep up with you and this story. Please keep it up!!

I really enjoyed reading your story it is very in character for being an all human modern type story. I am really hoping you post more soon and if you have a email or anything that you send out when u update I would love to be on that list! Please update soon!!! Your biggest fan, Lillie~

I very much enjoyed the story thus far. And I think Sesshomaru is very much in character, not explaining himself and everything. Also Rin, the fact that she is starting to understand him and accept him as is and the fact that she is well aware that he's not the perfect guy and doesn't have the best outlook on life I guess gives it more dimension to the character. She's not just some silly girl with a crush that would would say "how high" when she's ordered to jump. I would love to see Rin taking control of the situation a bit and playing with his feelings now that she knows he is interested.For instance I expected her not to be ready at all for their date and be in pjs or something funny like that and show very little interest in going out with him now that he offered and messing with his mind a bit, showing him just because he says something doesn't mean the world stops there. It's easy, however, to see how they complete each other and the story is fascinating. I can tell you this much, I read a lot of fan fictions and this is the first one where his full time job is that of a surgeon. Was wondering how come no one ever thought of that considering how this life choice is for someone so calculated and cold and precise as is Sesshomaru's character.
Anyhow I hope you continue with updating this story and know that I'm enjoying it very much.

You're still writing this story right? D: I hope so, I love it--I keep checking back in hopes of a new chapter, Its really good--please keep writing <3

This story is lovey. It flows so well, natural. Rin is so herself, a chatterbox. I love every aspect you've added to her personality. I feel as though I'm watching a award winning moive. Acually, now that I've thought about it, this would make an amazing moive. With the rough Risa, tender duckies and fancy dates. Gah, I'd love to see that moive!
Your wonderful detials are what making this story so easy to see. Though their also distracting. I find myself skipping over parts about this or that. How does knowing the pint on her Aunt's shower curtian add to the story? Or knowing every single outfit. You go into too much detial, slim it down a bit for a easier read.
Please, update soon! I just adore the plot and way you tell this story. I cant wait for the next chapter.

just found this story and love it, I do hope you are going to continue writing it :)

I just love your story!!! You are a brilliant and amazing writer! I have been following this story on the other Fanfiction.net site and just realized that you have mentioned in the very 1st chapter heading that this story was also posted on the Adult FF site so I came here to read it again! Keep up the great work & I will be looking forward to your updates on both sites! I usually do not leave reviews but this story line has become my favorite & I love the way in which Rin and Sessh's relationship has evolved (although I hope he does not end up breaking her heart and that they find a Happily Ever After with each other!!

I'm so glad you're back with this story.....Yahoo!!! I didn't know you wrote on ff.net too?...I have to look for you pen name there..as always great story, I feel the same as Rin ..what to do when you have a god like man kiss you and then leave you? I can't wait to see what is going to happen next...Please keep the stories coming!!