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Awww, I'm happy they've finally worked out that part. I think Genkai had the right idea. LOL. Now I have to wonder what's gonna happen when Yusuke and Keiko get home. Will Kurama put his foot in it? And when Hiei and Kagome get loose will there be more hell to pay? Ah, the suspense, I love it.
Update soon please.

I love the story plot, this story is so good and I can't wait for the other chapter. Thank you for all of your stories because it takes a lot of hard work and to come up with something with such brilliance; It probably takes up most of your time to make this and I just wanted to let you know that it is greatly appreciated. Thanks and keep up the good work.

What the hell you can't leave it like that, I need some smex! not to mention Hiei needs to grovel, just shoving it in there. Did he get lessons from my ex? Aoshi says to tell him to lick it before he sticks it next time! *hands you a paddle* Keep up the good work!

Great start. Update soon. Can't wait to read Hieis' reaction of what happened with Kagome considering his sense of smell.

Had to read this AGAIN! It's just so darn good! I don't think I reviewed it on this site yet, and as I read it this time, a couple of different things stuck with me. Hiei's thoughts about not wanting anyone to know how deep his fixation ran, but he knew it was only a matter of time before it came to light were insightful. But his determination to not act on his desires just because Kurama told him he should really shows a stupidly stubborn streak, ne? Then we see he thinks something of this magnitude requires contemplation. Doesn't sound like he's just looking at her as a lover, does it? He's thinking permanent mate? And yet he realizes there's a good chance she'll turn him down because he hasn't been nice to her. What kind of a baka is he? Answer: a MALE one. And Yusuke revealed that Hiei hadn't really settled down after his confrontation with Kurama after all. He got so irritable thinking about what she might be doing. Did he really threaten to go to the club and kill all the males? Or was Yusuke exaggerating to make a point about his irritability? So, Yusuke volunteered to go check on her, huh? Was that good enough, or did Hiei show up while Yusuke was punching out Daichi? (Where the heck did all her friends GO?) And I just loved it when Keiko ordered Yuske a beer for when he got back. Great attitude! So, when do we get to find out what happens next? Soon, I hope! That will be quite a scene when she comes face to face with Hiei after what happened! Loving it!!

Argh!! Please update sooon! I am dying to find out what happens next! Onegui!!!!!!!!!

i really REALLY like this story, the suspence is killing me, i'm always cheakin to see if its updated yet i can't wait to see what hiei dose when he smells that on her!! those two are my fav. couple and their chemistry is to die for!! so please PLEASE update soon!!:P

Woo! Another great piece of work! I love the tension between Kagome and Hiei- you've captured both their characters and the situation brilliantly! Please update when you can!!

More please, this looks like a very exciting story!

Woohoo!! another fic... YAY Keep them comeing and Ill keep reading! very nice too. I can't wait untill Hiei smels that on her hehehehe!