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for Explosive Chemistry

by ryukotsusei

person ptbear
schedule May 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Great story. Wish you would continue it. Would like to read how Kagome handles Yukina and her questions.
schedule September 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
i love this story! you told it perfectly, you are an excellent storyteller!
person Sam D
schedule June 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
*rolls on the floor in laughter* HAHAHAHAHAHA OMG Yusuke is soo DEAD!!! Hiei is gonna shish-kabob him!!! I loved it!!!
schedule April 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
i must say this has been one of the most wonderful stories to read. u have done a great job with the story so far. i hope u get better soon. please update when u can.
schedule February 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Freaking HILARIOUS!!! My god, I almost died here at my laptop when I read that bit about Yukina's questions and Yusuke and Kurama's interaction. This was another amazing chapter, and I'm not sure if you're going to continue this, but if you are, props to you! This was just an awesome three chapters, and I enjoyed every word. Thanks for sharing this with us, it's great!
person Diane
schedule February 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I really like this. I'm sorry to hear you're having health problems, I hope you get better soon.
person VB
schedule February 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
ohgodohgodohgodohgodohgod!!! My poor ribs, my poor head. and poor Kagome. It's about time you updated ;P, but that was so worth the wait. I can't wait for the next chapter.
person Sierra
schedule February 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
"OMG, YES! It's totally MY fault you raped me! Thank you for showing me the error of my ways!!! Of course, if I'd been a whore, you would have been giving me what I deserved! He can't be expected to give me the benefit of the doubt? What am I THINKING?!"

Genius.

Your logic literally leaves me horrified and beyond fearful for anyone who might ever come to you with questions of appropriate sexual behavior.
schedule February 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I reviewed on another site but I also want to comment here as well. I stand by my belief that this story was very well written, well thought out, and even tastefully done compared to ALOT of smut I've read. Also I went back and looked, in your summary it clearly states what can be expected so if someone doesn't like the subject matter it's beyond me why they would read it, much less put up a review like that unless they have nothing better to do then try to spread their own agenda. Don't let them get to you, your writing is quality work and I most sincerely hope you continue to do so. Don't change a thing.
person madmiko
schedule January 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Yep. Me again. Still obsessing over this story. Honestly, it's still one of the best Hiei/Kag fics out there. I am still anxiously awaiting the conclusion. You never disappoint, and I am looking forward to that satisfaction that can only be experienced when a story ends just right.