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I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?

Okay, that was good. I have to admit. That part where he threw back his head and roared with laughter, when his mate is about to battle someone to the death. Jeez. But yeah, that was enough to make me review and tell you how good that part was. ;)

Aw, jeez. You ended it there? What a cliffy! And I'm sneaky about being on this site. Because I am old enough (just turned) but I still live with my parents so... their rules are the rules and this site is against those rules. >>" So I'm probably not going to get to read any future chapters... :( Oh well.

Well. It was a good story while it lasted. I liked it a lot even though I DON'T like the idea of Kagome becoming a youkai, in any story for any reason whatsoever. That's just my personal bias/idealism though. I don't think someone should change species like that. Like, "Song in the Silence" (a novel). He's a dragon right, and she's human. And you're feeling all bad for them the entire time because they can't ever really BE together. And then he turns into a human! And it's practical and everything, and allowed her to write two other books. And I should've been happy for them. But MAN. It still didn't seem right. And Kagome turning into a youkai, or a hanyou, just doesn't seem right either. And I also HATE HATE HATE the idea of Inuyasha turning human or youkai permanately. He is a hanyou, he should be accepted for what he is (and personally I think it's the best of both worlds), and he should NOT have to change. I hate the idea of him changing. And it's just WEIRD for Kag to change. But I digress.

I DO love the idea of her 'acid' poison. That comparision was awesome. I liked it when it was just pink miko poison, but then you compared it to the way acid worked and I was like: woah. That's awesome. I want acid powers... Can I use that? Seriously? I'm on an Inuyasha roleplaying site and I would love to give a youkai a power like that. Not miko powers, exactly. More like actual acid... *digresses again*

I like your story. You should continue it, even if I don't get to come back and read the rest.

This is just to say that I lov your fic and the idea that Kagome-sama would turn into a youkai, I love it when that happens!! I can't wait until Inuyasha finally finds out though, not to mention Miroku-sama... if this would have been different perhaps they could have been together, oh well Sango-san lost my respect and doesn't deserve someone like Miroku-sama anyways!!

I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?

i WAS WAITING FOR SOMEONE TO WRITE HOW sANGO WOULD STEAL iNUYASHA! gREAT U DID! PLEASE UPDATE sOON!

I wonder who it is she smells? And who is going to lose their life next?

I am happy that you liked my story enough to mention it here with your great story. Thanks for the plug! ;)

Until we meet again.

Love it! I especially love Kagome's thoughts about everything -- so well-written! I'm seriously hoping that the scent trail she's caught is the Inu-gang. AND I seriously hope Inu knows he screwed up royally because he did NOT choose the strongest female in his pack. (Yeah, I like a lot of Inu remorse and regret -- it makes my day! And I really hate Inu/Sango pairings, so I hope she regrets mating with HIM, too. I'd love for him to want Kagome back and her to want Miroku back.) And why didn't Miroku tell her sooner, anyway? Did he think it would hurt any less? And isn't HE upset about it? So, is Maru-chan proud of his mate's ability to kick ass? Was he surprised she killed her opponent? Sure hope he's properly passionate when he catches her -- even if she's facing off the Inu-gang. Or whoever it is. I just can't wait for the next chapter of this! It's SO good!

I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?

HOT DAMN!!! I can't wait to read how Kagome ripped the nasty bitch to shreds! Than, of course, Sesshomaru has his lovely, hot way with her. *shivers*

Update soon, please!! *puppy dog eyes, and pout for good measure*

Until we meet again.