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This was a really good read but from the page I found it on I believe it's long been abandoned. I really would have liked to have found out what happened next.

I just read the last chapter in this series. Thanks for the update, i know life issues happen and yes even fanfic writers have a life outside of, well, writing fanfic. Kudos for not putting our favorite, and since reading this fanfic not my favorite, hanyou, InuYasha, in this chapter. It would take a lot to forgive my love interest boyfriend that was "mating" with my best friend. If and when you do bring InuYasha, Sango (Skanko), Miruko (forgive spelling for the monk) and Shippo, please make it where Kagome tells them off REAL good and on an individual basis and at camp. Please don't let Kagome go back to InuYasha and let her stay with Shessomaru, they seem so happy with each other and Kagome seems to be equal to him even if she is human. Note: this is only a suggestion. Update soon...can not wait to read more. :)

Please tell me that this story has been continued or completed on another site???

omg u have to continue with this story its very interesting and cute lol update soon^_^

wow thats a GREAT story love to hear more!!!

I surfed this website for a good Inuyasha/Kagome pair and was pleasantly surprised to see a Shessomaru/Kagome pairing...hot, hot, hot!!! First of all Sango would've been bitch slapped...Inuyaha or Inutrasha would be missing a digit! Hey, Shessomaru is drop dead gorgeous!!! Please make sure that Kagome confront Inutrasha and Skanko, I mean Sango as the bride of Shessomaru. This should be rather interesting.

write more its really good

Yay! I was so happy to find a new chapter of this story! Kouga and Ayame, huh? Well, they need to be dealt with, too, don't they? Kagome has led a rather complicated love life, hasn't she? Love the way Sess is handling Kouga -- didn't the baka wold realize he couldn't attack the Western Lord's mate without getting his butt kicked? And Ayame should be nicer to Kagome -- after all, she doesn't have to worry about her taking Kouga away any more. As a matter of fact, Kagome was telling him to honor his committment to her. She should be grateful As for Inuyasha: I really, really hope that he craps his hakamas when he sees Kagome again. His sudden mating of Sango doesn't lead me to believe it was prompted by LOVE, but instead by his instinctual desire for the "strongest bitch in his pack," right? Well, he's going to find out he made a terrible miscalculation, isn't he? Because Sango's strength doesn't even begin to compare with Kagome's. And he can regret that little mistake for the rest of his life. I DO wonder about Sango's motivations, though. Why did she mate with Inuyasha? What about Miroku? What about her training as a Youkai Exterminator? Seems mating with one would go against everything she was raised to do and believe. Heck, whenever he would transform, she would get all nervous and scared of him. Can SHE bring him back to himself like Kagome always did? About the Tessaiga: Inuyasha was able to master it and control its power because of his desire to protect KAGOME. Will it still work for him now that he betrayed her? (I have to think it wouldn't.) And why did Inuyasha choose Sango over Kikyou? Because Kikyou's body is dead and cannot reproduce? Does he still love HER? How does Sango feel about that? I've got to say, I'm seriously hoping you make both Inuyasha and Sango miserable together -- they deserve to be for betraying Kagome like that. I want them to SUFFER. Even if Kagome eventually forgives them, I hope they forever feel like they made a big mistake. (Yes, I'm a vindictive bitch myself.) I hope Inuyasha's eyes pop out of his head when he sees Kagome and realizes how powerful she is, and also that his brother got the real alpha bitch. Heh heh! I just can't wait to see how you handle it all. I will be anxiously awaiting your next chapter!!! Love Maru and Kagome!! Love your writing! This is awesome!

wow that was awsome ... please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please update soon i would love to read more ... later for now

angel

its very good so far i didnt much like how kagome just gave it all up he should have had to work for her virginity courting is just as important as mating ...other then that i really like the story and i hope you update soon

~Ja HoshiGiniro