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for Bitten

by theamazingshoe

schedule October 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
really quite good and well written! i didn't have any of those sudden stops from mispelled, misused words or grammar. the cliff hanger was expertly executed.

i can't wait to read more!

thank you,
ginny
person ecci
schedule October 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
i really want to know what happens! O_O please update! and as far as i can see, no mistakes..^_^