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for Kagome: The Shamelss Miko

by unique

person madmiko
schedule December 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Ha! Hilarious! I love it that you brought Aikitoki into the mix. We need all available males to appreciate the new Kagome, right? And the catfight-turned-mud wrestling match was great! Loved it that Sango got in on it, too. My question is: since Kikyou got her butt kicked, how does she compare in Inuyasha's eyes? I thought it was pretty interesting that he wanted to do a side-by-side comparison. I don't think Kikyou can hold a candle to the new, improved, super-sexy Kagome. Here's an outfit suggestion: leopard skin print miniskirt and halter top with matching headband. And i'm hoping her pj's are just as cute and sexy as the rest of her clothes have been. Some silky red teddies? (Heck, throw in the garters, if you want!) Will we see Naraku again soon? Hope Kouga comes back, too -- love the President of Boob Worshippers. Got any other guys to bring on? Maybe the sight of the new Kagome would make Hakudoshi shoot through puberty -- he did age about 10 years in less than a day before. He'd be a pretty hot 18-year-old. I was so happy to see this new chapter! This fic always leaves me smiling! Awesome job! Write more soon!!
person ILuvFLUFFYmarshmellows
schedule December 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
omg...this fic is so FREAKING hilarious!!!! haha i read only the first chp of this in fanfic.net but when i saw it here i was so xcited!! haha i love how the guys r oogling n droolin over kagome! i couldnt stop laughing! my sister looked at me like i grew a secong head but i couldnt stop! it was so funny! haha...i hav another idea for kagome's nxt clothing choice:a pirate-a white sheer long sleeved top with the front having a cut showing a peak of ample cleavage,a maroon leather corset on top, a short black skirt/shorts, and black high heeled boots, bandana and make-up is optional..well cant wait till u update!
person lala_land
schedule December 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
took you logn enough please please write some more!!!! Love this story!! sesshomaru is so cute in here!! iwas imagining the whole thingZ!!
person Arabella
schedule December 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
That chapter was CRAZY!!!!!!!!!!! It most certainly provided me with a good laugh & I sure as hell needed it. Thanks. Please update soon.
person Mari-chan
schedule December 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I totally love this fic!!! It's so funny and I can't wait to see what happens next!!! Keep it up!
person Hillary (Ryokomaru)
schedule December 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
MY GOD THAT WAS SOOOO FUNNY!!! I WANT MORE!!!!!!1
person madmiko
schedule November 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This is hilarious!! I am SO loving it! I can't wait until you add more. Sesshoumaru's thoughts are too much -- she'd better sleep in it and love it! Ha! Love Kouga as the breast man, too. Rin's questions and wanting to dress like her are great. Love Kohaku being part of the group as a hormonal teen. Poor Shippo with the sexy mama. Just loving it all!
person lafille84
schedule November 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
i love this story thus far. and the part with inuyasha's cum is fucking HILARIOUS!! i can't wait to see what u come up with next!!
person ASHLEY
schedule October 31, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I LIKE IT... I WAS LAUGHING MY ASS OFF AT THIS. I GOT A SUGESSTION ABOUT WARDROBE.... HOW ABOUT A LIGHT PINK SILK TOP TOP KIND OF THING THAT TIES AROUND THE NECK AND IS TIGHT AROUND THE BREAST BUT AFTER THAT HANGS LOOSE AND COMES TO ABOUT YOUR BELLY BUTTON IF NOT HIGHER... I KIND FORGOT WHAT ITS CALLED THOUGH. AND A JEAN SKIRT THAT BARLY COVERS HER BUTT. AND A PAIR OF ANY KIND OF SHOES REALLY BUT I GOTTA TELL YOU THAT YOU HAVE TO BE CAREFUL WITH THE HIGH HEELS CUZ YOU HAVE TO KEEP IN MIND THAT SHES WALKING EVERY WHERE AND STUFF LIKE THAT. LOL THIS IS A REALLY INTERESTING STORY. KEEP IT UP AND UPDATE SOOOOOOOON!!!!!
schedule October 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
OMFG!! *rolling on the floor laughing* this story is too much! I love all the sexual tension that you are building up. And having all the demonic males fighting over her is ... just ... funny, for lack of another word. Well, entertaining also springs to mind.

I can't wait to read the next chapter!I don't care if it is a few months away, could you please email me when you update again?

Until we meet again.