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November 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I like this chapter is was short but sweet
I like the part when Inuyasha jumps in the well
and Kagome turns around and there he is waiting
for her. I can't wait till part 2 is up. Till
then stay safe and happy. ;)
I like the part when Inuyasha jumps in the well
and Kagome turns around and there he is waiting
for her. I can't wait till part 2 is up. Till
then stay safe and happy. ;)
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November 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Awww. That was so sweet. He waited for her five hundred years. I wonder what happened during that time. Are you going to let us know?
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November 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
By the way, I didn't mean to leave you in the lurch about my opinion on your story, but I have been moving some this week (to be finished this weekend!). I adored this sweet story (a bit sappy, but it was called for and worked). I finally had some down time waiting for folks and decided to read some.
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November 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Very Nice ending.
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October 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 6 made me sad. I didn't think
Kagome was going to died you soon. I like
this chapter by the way. I can't wait till
the next update and the sequel. In the meantime
stay safe and happy :)
Kagome was going to died you soon. I like
this chapter by the way. I can't wait till
the next update and the sequel. In the meantime
stay safe and happy :)
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October 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 6 -- Nice and short but important.
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October 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
it's badly written... and the chappies are far too short BUT.... it seems more like you are just having trouble organizing the ideas. I like this story a lot... but first the four chapters you have could have EASILY been one chapter. AND you have a ton of misspellings and grammar problems.
you do however have a good idea going that makes me want to keep reading even though your substance and dynamics are off.
careful.
you do however have a good idea going that makes me want to keep reading even though your substance and dynamics are off.
careful.
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October 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 5 -- A little short, but thanks for the update!!
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October 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter and great story. till
next time stay safe and happy.
next time stay safe and happy.
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October 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I am not entirely sure where this story is going, but I am interested in finding out.