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by rakanasama

schedule May 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
It's a good story. I liked the plot, and the part where Rin announces that she's expecting was cute. But, please be a bit more careful on your spelling. Keep up the good work and up-date soon.
person InuYoukai
schedule November 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 13 & 14 -- Great updates. Inuyasha is finally part of the family. Wonder how the other demons are going to react.
person keisha
schedule November 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
great love it keep up the good work
person InuYoukai
schedule November 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 12 -- AWW, that was so cute.. Love the chapter.
person InuYoukai
schedule October 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 9 -- That was so great.. It was cute
person Christina
schedule October 20, 2006 at 12:00 AM
good story liked it alot but, there were no lemons so it shouldn't be in adultff.net.
schedule October 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Hehe, Miroku empathizing with Inu Yasha about beating Shippo up. Cute. Please update soon.