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for A Dragon's Vengeance

by kimisan

person Ryukotsusei
schedule October 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Poor Kags, I guess she finally realizes escape is well and truly hopeless. I get the feeling many are going to die in this upcoming tournament. I don't see Ryu as being the merciful type allowing a lot of people to live. As for your author's note, these people need to get over it. I could always send over Masakazu from Moon to help Ryu out with Kagome although I don't think they'd stop at using a broken bottle this time. lol Good chapter, looking forward to more. Update soon please
person Anon
schedule October 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
OMG! That rape scene was... OMG. I felt so sorry for Kagome but at the same time I was like OH YEAH! Okay, I'm sick in the head. I can't wait to see what happens at the tournament. Who is going to die? Will there be lots of blood? This is wonderful!
person Coffee Gyrl
schedule October 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I love this! Oh this is a great dark story and I'm really enjoying your set up. I'm egarly looking forward to the next installment. And the 'sweetness' nickname is wonderfully greasy. Gotta love a sexy asshole, that's what we liked so much about Naraku.
person Ryukotsusei
schedule October 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I must say this is certainly a unique start to a story. I'm looking forward to seeing where you go with this. Update soon please.
person madmiko
schedule October 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Powerful beginning! Obviously a darkfic. I assume Koenma will be unhappy to learn Kagome has been taken as Ryuokossei's mate, ne? Can't wait to see how they get around that when all is said and done. The question is: does the team get sent to rescue her, or do they come after her because of something her new mate makes her do? (I hope it's a rescue mission -- hate it when Kagome goes bad.) I'm looking forward to the next chapter!
person Coffee Gyrl (NSI)
schedule October 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oh what a great start, very new. I am enjoying this new twist and can't wait to see what you do with it.