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October 20, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I'd definitely become a vegetarian at that point and lemme tell you, I normally cant stand anything that's not a part of the meat group. *shudders* ew, it would figure he likes seeing them prepared alive, the sadistic bastard. Can't wait to read more, update soon please. *sends you naked Hiei cookies*
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October 20, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Ohh how wonderfully sick and twisted, I'm really enjoying this. Hmm is Hiei going to be the one sent with some food or talk to her soon? I really like the tension.
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October 19, 2006 at 12:00 AM
good job!
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October 19, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Another good chapter, glad to see the guys showing up. I'm sure that they're all more than ready to have a go at Ryu but hopefully Koenma can get them calmed down before they go rushing in to get themselves killed. Good chapter, update soon please.
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October 19, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oh my, he sounds like a real bastard. I can't wait to see where you are going with this and I'm sure it will get darker. When will Hiei and Kagome meet? In the next chapter I hope. Well, off to read chapter 3.
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October 19, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Ok, they didn't actually meet but saw each other. I'm not sure what to say about Ryu though. I'm torn between wanting to say 'AWWWW, so sweet' and 'OMG, that bastard!'. Excellent job there, I'm enjoying this one a lot. Can't wait for the next chapter.
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October 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Nice second chapter, poor Kagome. Second chapter was kind of short but gave good detail, what will the dragon dude do now? Please don't let him kill Jin, that's my favorite character.
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October 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I'm really enjoying this & am hoping for a confrontation between Kagome & Koenma, I can just see her chewing him out & maybe attacking him because he didn't mention the 'loophole'. Can hardly wait for the next chapter.
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October 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Awesome opening. I like the fact that the past has come back to haunt Kagome in some way, and it isn't Naraku (or offspring). Poor Kagome, and I can imagine the fit that is happening in the Reiki. I wait with baited breath to see what happens next.
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October 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Another Hiei/Kagome, awesome. As I'm sure which is obvious it's my favorite pairing. Interesting how you are going to work the plot, I can't wait to see you do it. Kind of rough with rape in the first chapter but I look forward to see what's going to happen. Gotta feel for Kagome that dude has to be horrid. But I've never seen him used as the badguy before. I like the stories dark as real life tends to be. Keep up the good work.