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October 24, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Cool having Koenma's 'jr.' symbol disappear, its both sad and yet now he's a grown-up. I like how you are having him mature. For all his blustering Koenma really does have a sweet heart.
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October 24, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Well now that the threat is delivered somehow I doubt that Koenma's going to listen to him. He just won't be so foolish as to make a full out assault on the dragon now. And its about damned time that bastard gave Kags a chance to rest, what is he? The energizer bunny in disquise? lol Men! Good chapter, update soon please.
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October 24, 2006 at 12:00 AM
So Koenma is taking over things now, that's good. Like to see what he plans to do. His demeanor towards Kagome is almost touching until you remember what kind of bastard he is. I'm hooked on this story, please update soon.
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October 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
update please
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October 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Ohh Enma's throwing down? Wow I can't wait for an update you are really keeping me on the edge of my seat with this story. I love how twisted Ryu's being with making her enjoy it against her will, so very, very sick. This is a great story.
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October 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
nice..but im hoping that kagome doesnt start to like that bastard cause that could be so eww..lol..
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October 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Ok, I've been sucked into this story. I hope Kagome gets away from him soon. what a pig. Hopefully Hiei will be able to help her out.
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October 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This is an awesome addition! Yes I agree Enma isn't all powerful that was why he created the barrier in the first place to only hold back S and A class demons. B class demons like Trougine (younger brother) could pass through. I'm really interested in what Koenma will do. Kagome's soul could be reborn or given a new body could it not? Or are you going with total inhilation? I like that you brought back the soul-sucking-shpere from the series. This is a real page turner of a story and I'm just in love with it.
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October 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wow. The angst and dispair just keeps coming! Whos going to save her now? The toddler? Great stuff!
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October 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
You killed Enma! Oh wow, I didn't see that coming. What's going to happen now? Really sucks to be Kagome though. The good guys want her dead and the bad guy wants to keep her alive. What's a girl to do. Keep up the good work.