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please update ASAP!!! GREAT STORY!!!

Very good so far, though not quite sure where the fic is going! US

Whew! And I didn't think it could get any darker after the first couple of chapters. I'm surprised Kagome didn't let go of her soul to escape. I don't know how she's ever going to get free -- the dragon seems all-powerful. I love the hints of mutual attraction between her and Hiei, but that's so dangerous with the dragon being able to smell them and all, right? Don't know how much more of this I can take -- I'm wrung out after reading through the whole story to this point! Excellent job -- great writing skills!

I hate to say it, but I am really hooked on this story. Please update as soon as you can.

Goodness, Ryuukossei is a sadistic bas***d, but he's old, enjoying his new power (and mate) and not willing to give it up. So few writers are willing to touch on parts like demons eating humans, the death of Enma, etc., or can do it with the level of skill that you have. Even when bad things happen, I can't stop reading because it's just that engaging. Thank you for all of your hard work. Can't wait to see what happens next, or how everyone reacts (Reiki, spirit detectives, and Ryuukossei and Kagome).

I no longer have any sympathy for this Kagome, and have more than a bit of anger towards her. She has got to be the most selfish character in fanfic. She fought Enma. She tried and succeeded in preventing him from taking her soul. If she had simply let him kill her, Ryo could have been taken down because he would have lost so much power. You made that clear in your fic. That would have saved the fate of three worlds and would have saved her own family. But no, she wanted TO LIVE. . . Heaven forbid she sacrifice herself for the betterment of three worlds. She wanted TO LIVE. What a selfish creature. She deserves everything which happens to her.

To Dyquen about your review since I'm not sure when I'll be updating again. Perhaps you did not understand it when you read. She clearly stated "Why was he trying to kill her?" She just knows that she's bonded to him allowing him to use the jewel. She's human and no one has sat her down and explained the finer point of that type of youkai mating with her. So, she doesn't realize yet that if she dies so does he. And he's not going to be stupid enough to point it out to her. And naturally under any circumstances a person does not want to die. I'm sure if Enma would have explained it to her she might have allowed it but since she has no clue, she's not just going to want to die. Especially knowing that the man has the jewel, and shes the only one that can purify it. So, she's not really being selfish just somewhat ignorant to all the facts at this point in time. Just wanted to clear that up. Thanks for reading though.

Hee hee I really do like how he's slowly corrupting her. Nice to see Hiei's thoughts in the matter, I liked the smirk. Thank you for the quick update I'm really enjoying this story.

lol I like Satsu, though coming in with Hokeshin's head is enough to want me to buy the dog a toothbrush lol I wouldn't want to sleep on a drooled pillow either, especially knowing that. Good chapter, look forward to reading more. Update soon please.

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