rate_review Reviews

I looove this story!!!!! Please tell me you plan to finish it!!!!!

Very, very nice... I enjoyed this first lemon, it was hot and juicy.
Yeah, I agree that plot is important, I like to read a lemon based somehow on a story ;)

Just a suggestion: maybe you should write in the summary at least the pairing, just to attract people. I believed, because there was no summary at all, that this was one of those stupid stories that don't make sense.
Now I know better, but before reading I was in doubt.


Just don't let me wait too long for another chapter ;)

Holy fack, it's you! You're back, and with a wonderful new story! Your style has changed a bit since 'On The Sea', it's much more polished. Anyway! I really like how this story is getting along, and I like the foreshadowing on Inuyasha... a bit of hanyou possessiveness maybe?

Yummy! You write exceptionally well, like a seasoned veteran (and I mean that in the most complimentary way!) And while plot is definitely good, lemons in every chapter, esp. b/c of the blushes and fainting spells and eyes glued so tightly to the computer screen I get when I read yours, are definitely a must!

This story is great! I don't know exactly where the plot is going, but your dialogue, scenes...ahem lemony scenes *grins*, and characterizations are near/bordering on perfection. The only thing I'd recommend is having a more definitive, eye-catching summary. That way you'll get all the hits and reviews you definitely deserve! GL with your next update...I'll be waiting!