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October 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Clever, well-written, and possessing depth that's lacking in most of the material on this site. Ignored what the others say about writing a sequel; it's unnecessary.
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November 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I loved your story but I was just wondering if Kagome is going to call him Inuyasha even though his name in his reincarnated form is Akio, or just just keep going back and forth between the two. Keep up the good work.
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November 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Dude, VIRGINAL LEMON? That was SUPERB. And even more, it had a PLOT! Nicely done!!
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October 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This was just absolutley freakin adoreable
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October 19, 2006 at 12:00 AM
it was good i liked it
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October 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Yay, very fun read. I liked the ending.
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October 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
So sweet. I loved it :) a great read, going to recommend it to others.
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October 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
ACtually I think you did a nice job on this. The lemon part was well written. The plot made sense and I could see a story based on that only more elaborated with several chapters instead of one with nice time span summaries. ^_^ I'll be watching you for more now!
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October 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
wow... this was your FIRST lemon? this was pretty dang good! even though the reincarnation plotline has been used before, you put a different spin to it and conjured up one of the best lemon scenes i'd read in a while. do the world a favor and write more lemons in the future. hehe. keep it up! ^_^
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October 15, 2006 at 12:00 AM
HAHA that was cute.
I hope he fell. that was very sweet.
I hope he fell. that was very sweet.