rate_review Reviews

I love it you captured his personaitly perfectly

I don't know what ppl have been saying about your character, and honestly, I could careless. You've got an excellent, entertaining story going on here. I'm a huge IY/Kag shipper but can definitely appreciate a good alternative Kag pairing if it's written well. You've definitively got Naraku down as this sinister yet seductive, and at times sympathetic character (especially with the whole Onigumo's heart thing). I can't wait to see how you further develop the scenes between Naraku and Kagome, and my only complaint is, well it's rather selfish. But I wish your chapters were longer. Blame it on my need to read more of your writing since you do it so deliciously well. Continue on with the dark and seductive undertones of this story and I'll be watching for an update!

I like it so far. Can't wait for the next chapter. ^_^

Well, concept is interesting, but I mostly wanted to review to say that i thought the third chapter was significantly better than the first two. A definite improvement. I think the pace was better, and the description of what was going on was easier to follow. I'm curious what will happen next.

oh, i wonder what Naraku will do to Kagome that will make InuYasha suffer??? hmmm...do you mean he wants to do the naughty! eh heh eh...that will definitely make me wanna read this even more! so anyways, good story and i hope you update soon and i mean real SOON!