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*Grin* Thank you for the lemon Caesar!! You did a good job on it, excellent discriptions and use of metaphores during the act. The 'panting like an animal,' was a good comparison. :D I enjoyed this chapter thouroghly. -kinoko

Wow. Just...Wow! My expectations have been FULLY met, thank you!

"Even to the souls that dare to intrude upon their personal Elysium."

So they DID have an audience. Do tell me more!

So that's where InuYasha is. The stupid mutt! Now he is going to burst in and spoil the moment!

But seriously, this was not a bad chapter. It was a little short, but it gave that necessary amount of tension to the plot, and brought back in to play characters that may have been forgotten. I can't wait to see the dressing down Kagome Gives to InuYasha, but how will she justify herself to the others? I smell angst.

I'm still waiting on that Lemon :)

I like your story, it's very nice and intriging :) Don't let what reviewers say about you (personally) affect your decision or passion for writing this story or any story for that manner. There will always be assholes in this world because without them there wouldn't be any good honest people around. Kind of like ying and yang... you have the good and the bad, two sides to the same coin. All you can do is cover the hurt with a smile and say 'thanks for being an ass,' and move on. Focus on the good... I'm sure there's plenty :). There are spelling and gramatical errors, but other than that I really love this story (errors and all). I think that your little blunders make this story endearing and it shows that you actually are human and make mistakes. Thank you for writing a Naraku/Kagome fic, there aren't enough out there-- and more power to you when it comes to continuing this story. We Naraku/Kagome authors need to stick together and motivate one another to continue our challenging endevor to get good (willing) lemony (but tasteful) action between these two characters. Keep on fighting and keep on writing! -kinoko

And another thing.... ^_^ did I mention I love lemons? I can't wait to read one written by you! :D -kinoko

OMG and another thing... Do you believe in Karma? I don't know why but I have this sinking feeling that little Inu is going to see Kags and Naraku finally getting it on. MUAHHAHAHAHAHA!! PAY BACK IS A BITCH!! -kinoko

Very very good, I love this pairing so much.

Wow. Thank you so much for writing this - this is just what I have been looking for! I love all Nar/Kag pairings, but there is a sad lack of anything that is truly consensual and had an actual plot. So often writers seem to trap Kagome into something she doesn't want and has to learn to accept. I like how your Naraku is slowly falling for Kagome and isn't really fighting it. And if there is anyone who can feel compassion and love for Naraku, it's Kagome.

That fight with Sess was awesome! I love how both Naraku and Kagome kept trying to defend each other. I wonder what Sess will do now? Will he go after them again? Or will he go and tell InuYasha what his girl is up too? And what's InuYasha doing, anyway?

Of course, I want the rest of that Lemon you dangled before us. What an evil place to stop!

I like how this story is going. Naraku and Kagome pairings can sometimes be a hard one to do, but yours is doing just fine. It's not the usual rape story that alot of people make for this pairing. Anyways, I wish to see more of this story and find out how it turns out. Good luck to making the next chapters, try to keep the little writers block curse from getting to ya. lol

Love'n it! Please update a.s.a.p!!! Naraku is such a hottie! And damn this is good! Probably the best one I've read! No lie! But more chapters make it, oh, so much better! Ja ne! ~Aleu