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kinda irks me you took your stories down because of drama. This started out strong, and I was really sad and confused there wasn't more when it has apparently been completed. Should probably just take the whole story down or at least edit it so people like me don't become sad pandas.

Sweet Mama, this is hot! More please!

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"Was this perhaps, what had so attracted the wicked Onigumo to Kikyo? But even with the fluttering’s of Onigumo’s heart, it was the demon, Naraku, that had shown more interest in the lithe human. He took a particular satisfaction in being close to her as her trained her. "

In that last sentence don't you mean ....to her as HE trained her."? In chapter 6.

OMG.I Am So In Love With Your Writing.It's Torture.I Want MORE!Hurry And UPDATE!! =]

And You're Right.The Plot IS Amazing.Lovin' It.

Hmmm this is the first time I've read about Naraku using tentacles during sex...Which is kinda weird cause I read a Harry Potter one with tentacles before I'd ever found one with Naraku. Nice story btw, to an earlier chapter note just ignore the idiots. I'm right there with you when you say that flames are funny. Anyone who starts being mean to another author by personally slaming them is typically a hypocrite. I honestly can't think of any questions about the story aside from "What's going to happen next?" But then that question is kind of a given. I like your work it not as...I don't know how to phrase it exactly. I find a lot of authors either rush their story, drag it out or make it very choppy. Aside from the chapters being a smidge too short for my tastes, I can't complain. (If my review makes little sense it's probably cause I'm writing on very little sleep. But I make an effort to leave a review that at least says something meaningful.) Tataa for now. ^_~

I LOOOOVE IT PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!!!!!!!!

This is a great story! Could you please email me when you update as this site does not notify of updates. The storyline is absolutely magnificent so keep up the good work and I hope to see an update soon!

ooo aaaw. he's a cold bastard but kagome thawed him out. stupid jerk. he better make it up to her for the rest of her life.

aww he's in love this was really good I loved everything about this chapter

I love you! I truly do! What an awesome chapter. As far as plot and characterization go, this is your best chapter yet. Pretty creative to, with the whole dream sequence. I was wondering how that would play out. I loved Kagomes reaction to how Naraku woke her up. Poking around in the head of someone you love, looking for deep, dark secrets is generally not the best way to make up after a fight, as I see Naraku has found out! Narakus regret and self-disgust was everything I could have asked for and really moves him along as a character. I'm glad that they seemed to have sort of made up at the end of the chapter, but it seems that Naraku still has a lot of explaining to do. Kagome is going to have to realize that the man she is in love with is, indeed, EVIL, and learn and learn to accept what comes with it, and realize that so long as her man truly loves her, being a prize worth fighting over is a good thing!

Once again, this was a great chapter and I eagerly await more.
Happy Holidays - KariLeanne