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Forgive my language, but is that bitch crazy?!!! PLEASE let Sango or someone beat that girl down and put her in her place! I'm glad that Sango caught Kagome at her own little game. Too bad Sango has to now found out what happened to Inuyasha and his first pup. Thanks for updating because it was like late birthday present to me! I can re-read this story over and over and never get tired of it! I'll be waiting around for chapter 32!

I can understand the protective feeling of Kouga since I have became a mother myself a few weeks ago. We will do anything to protect our kids, believe it !

A tiny tiny tiny part of me is feeling sorry for Kagome because she is to self-center to know what is really good for her. everyone else would have know better then to provoke demon on they own ground. Can wait to read the consequences of is actions. I don't want her to died, let her live with the punishment and the knowlegde that she had lost Inuyasha, it will be a cruel but good reminder of his foolishness.

I have always like Sango in the manga, more calm and analyzing the situation. She can be a real friend to Inu. I can't wait to see the conversation that those two will have. Shippo his a kid and didn't understand all of what was going on. I pity the poor little fox, he is just so cute. Miroku, well... he is less a pervert in this story and I like it. Hope he will be faithfull to Sango. Don't punish those three too much if you do so.

Perfect. Wonderful. I have no words to say how I loved this chapter. Please more.

dude! i was just thinking about it and you should so have kagome fed to those hyenas. it would be sweet justice >.< ^_^

Excellent. I was happy to see another posting to this story. There were only a few minor spelling or grammar errors that happened towards the bottom half of the story. You or your typist (I beleive you had a hand injury, unless I have you confused with someone else) would need to let your beta reader/editor take a little more care with it. However those little slips did not detract from the story overall.

For Example:
Kouga studied them silently for a moment, eyes flicking from a befuddled yet enraged Kagome to the obviously distressed and confused Sango and Miroku to more.

Corrected copy:
Kouga studied them silently for a moment, eyes flicking from a befuddled yet enraged Kagome to the obviously distressed and confused Sango and Miroku once more.

KYA!!!! i've been waiting for a new chapter and there's finally one! hehehe, kagome finally got what was coming to her, and i like how you got the others to describe it to her, it was a lot of fun to read. now we just need to find out how inuyasha's doing, and i'm so glad that sango gets to go, cause she is a really nice person. ^_^ anyways, keep up the awesome writing!

Yay! new chapter!
Kagome needs to be bitch-slapped, lol

Waiting for the next one, hurry up please. ^_^

hahaha in your face Kagome! lol. Finally put her in her place. great chapter.update soon and often i need my fix.

YAY! you updated! Kagome is such a bitch! She needs to get her ass kicked for treating inuyasha that way! in in luv with this story and your a great author. Please update when you can!

OOooooooooo and she's still high and mighty.....X_X'''' I really really can not wait to see what they do to her. Great chapter btw. As always I love your updates. ^_^