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by miyu557

person Anna
schedule November 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
KAGOME. IS. A. BITCH!
few, now that I said that, I'll review!
I'm so glad that Inuyasha is ok, and that Sango was able to talk to him without problems, I think that everything will be all right for a while, and I hope the bitch will learn her lesson ^^
person Kibou32
schedule November 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Hey!!!
I am soooo glad that you finally updated!! Yes! Teach Kagome some humility and also humiliate her as well... sometimes if a person is humiliated, that person learns some humility. Other than that... you are missing some words in your paragraphs... but then I think it might be missing typos and all that. So I await for the next chapter.

Thanks for a great story, you are a great writer.
person mcdgoddess
schedule November 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
IT'S ABOUT TIME!!!! Finally my addiction as been fed for the moment. I am so glad that Inuyasha has family and friends that truly love him! The scenes between Inuyasha and Koga were so cute! I'm glad that Kagome is about to get hers, but no matter what it will never equal to the lost that Inuyasha went through. There were some editing issues in this chapter, but I have gotten to the point that I almost don't care as long as I get to read another chapter. I hope that your writer's block goes away so we can get updates faster. As always I look forward to the next chapter and seeing what will happen at the council meeting!
person Anna
schedule October 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I must apologize. I've been reading your story for a while now, but seems that after chapter 19 I lost track of it... and I don't remember either if I have reviewed.
I'll make this short, I love your story, the twists and the angst of the beggining is a clear indication of how much of a great writter you're.
I'm trying to refrain of falling in the fangirl mood that is threatening to over come me, but I just have to say it: That that Kagome you bitch! Gods I hate her, she's just so full of herself. I'm very happy for Inuyasha, he found a family and a place he belonged in at last.
I said I'll make it short right?
I love you
I love your story
I want an update!
person Arasagi
schedule October 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
you must update again!!! it was great and i can't wait til kagome dies!! >.<, sorry just wishful thinking...please update when you can!!
person Pimpshit
schedule October 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
OMG! I totally LOVE this story!! ^_^ I got so excited when i saw you updated!! Keep up the awsome work!! P.S. I hope Kagome gets her comupance with what's his name in the future too!! ^_~
person evilchild (not signed in)
schedule October 15, 2006 at 12:00 AM
The bitch finally got a good talking down yet she still thinks she's in the right. I know teenagers are pig-headed and mostly think about themselves but even regular teenagers would know when they are wrong.

I want Inuyasha to slap her especailly since she showed no remorse over killing his pup. Whether she knew he was pregnant or not doesn't change the fact that she did kill his pup. That would make my day.
person Larimar
schedule October 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
YEAHHH! Punishment for Kagome! I can't wait!! Great Chapter!
person Steel Butterfly430
schedule October 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Well, I have finished Ch. 31 and..... *sighs*

I must say I'm disappointed. After building me up and getting my hopes up for a good Kags ass kickin', what do I get? What do I GET?! NOTHING!!!!!! Nada! Zilch! What do they do to her!? They YELL at her! And the wolves actually have the nerve to feed her! *stomps away muttering angrily*

Okay, um, okay, so I liked the chapter alright? I'm dying a slow death waiting for the next one.:p

SB
person Sekre
schedule October 12, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Haha, take that Kaggy!