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December 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Great story so far. Please continue!
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December 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This is quite a story that you have going on here. I'm not a big Kouga/Inu fan, but I am enjoying this story very much. It is well written and easy to follow. I find your version of Kagome a bit odd, but every fic needs an antagonist and we all choose who that person will be. I hope the bitch figures it out before her ass gets killed. LOL
Poor Inuyasha has been through so much. It can be really heart wrenching. Koga is great too. I love all of your original characters and that is saying a lot. You've done a really great job with that. I'm not feeling well, so I can't give you all of the accolades that you deserve. Just know, IMHO, that you have done a wonderful job.
Snow
Poor Inuyasha has been through so much. It can be really heart wrenching. Koga is great too. I love all of your original characters and that is saying a lot. You've done a really great job with that. I'm not feeling well, so I can't give you all of the accolades that you deserve. Just know, IMHO, that you have done a wonderful job.
Snow
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November 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Nice chapter. I just love Hotaru and is way to teach discipline. I can't wait to see Inuyasha give birth. I know from personal experience that it is not a easy thing to do.
Just one question : will we see Shesoumaru again soon ?
Just one question : will we see Shesoumaru again soon ?
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November 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
YEAH!! another chapter's up! please update again soon, i wanna have the pup born soon, please....how cute would it be if it was twins...a boy and a girl i'd say....*sigh* maybe i should try to write a story about these two too, anyways, keep up the good work ^_^
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November 12, 2006 at 12:00 AM
*cackles* loved that ending! Kagome getting what she deserves finally. Stuipd spoiled girl... She is slowly (very VERY slowly!) learning she's not top of the food chain in all places.
Sango is great. She always struck me as a more caring person then Kagome could be. And her nice talk with Inuyasha was well done, they seem to have become really great pals. Good for Inuyasha to have someone like Sango to talk to at times. She is a strong woman who is a good person and she acknowledges that she is not in her own element and that there is a higher chain of power that she cannot control. And she respects that chain of power. Kagome should take notes... Lots of notes... It might save her from the wrath of Inuyasha's new family who love him enough to kill... They acknowelgded that Sango is a demon slayer and said that though she slays demons her work is virtuous and she has better mannerisms then the "other". Sango always seems to have better mannerisms then Kagome. Kagome should have learned by then to maybe ask what is going in in a clam manner of the people that dont jump through time and know whats going on before she does something she wouldnt get herself into such big messes...
It seems that Kagome still doesnt understand that she's not on her ground and she cant do what she wants. To me it seems that Hotaru is going to like showing Kagome that she has no place in the wolves home and no authority and that while there she better shape up or ship out... *cackles* I dont think Kagome is going to like the wolves to much after this visit... But she brought this all on her own head for acting stupid and sitting Inuyasha in front of people who have no qualms about ripping something out of her to balance out what she has done to their precious Inuyasha...
I'm eager to see a bit more of Miroku and Shippo and how they are dealing with what is going on. Shippo especially, since he is so young. Miroku would be an interesting one to have a talk with about what is going on. He too understands that there is a higher chain of power that is going on and he too is respecting it. (Again Kagome should be taking notes...)
All in all even after 32 chapters you still have me eagerly waiting your next brillent chapter.
I am loving the direction that you are going with this story. It evolved more then i though and I am glad. It is a very enjoyable read with the aganst and ther happy and the smut er.. loving later.. *grins* I can only sit and wait now for your next chapter.
Sango is great. She always struck me as a more caring person then Kagome could be. And her nice talk with Inuyasha was well done, they seem to have become really great pals. Good for Inuyasha to have someone like Sango to talk to at times. She is a strong woman who is a good person and she acknowledges that she is not in her own element and that there is a higher chain of power that she cannot control. And she respects that chain of power. Kagome should take notes... Lots of notes... It might save her from the wrath of Inuyasha's new family who love him enough to kill... They acknowelgded that Sango is a demon slayer and said that though she slays demons her work is virtuous and she has better mannerisms then the "other". Sango always seems to have better mannerisms then Kagome. Kagome should have learned by then to maybe ask what is going in in a clam manner of the people that dont jump through time and know whats going on before she does something she wouldnt get herself into such big messes...
It seems that Kagome still doesnt understand that she's not on her ground and she cant do what she wants. To me it seems that Hotaru is going to like showing Kagome that she has no place in the wolves home and no authority and that while there she better shape up or ship out... *cackles* I dont think Kagome is going to like the wolves to much after this visit... But she brought this all on her own head for acting stupid and sitting Inuyasha in front of people who have no qualms about ripping something out of her to balance out what she has done to their precious Inuyasha...
I'm eager to see a bit more of Miroku and Shippo and how they are dealing with what is going on. Shippo especially, since he is so young. Miroku would be an interesting one to have a talk with about what is going on. He too understands that there is a higher chain of power that is going on and he too is respecting it. (Again Kagome should be taking notes...)
All in all even after 32 chapters you still have me eagerly waiting your next brillent chapter.
I am loving the direction that you are going with this story. It evolved more then i though and I am glad. It is a very enjoyable read with the aganst and ther happy and the smut er.. loving later.. *grins* I can only sit and wait now for your next chapter.
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November 12, 2006 at 12:00 AM
awesome update.
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November 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Cute chapter :) Can't wait until the pups are born ^^
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November 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Yes!!!! more chappies to read. Ya! Wonderful story and I love Hotaru. Keep writing.
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November 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
It would appear that Kagome still has a lot to learn about being in someone else's home.It was quit a surprise to see the update but a very happy one,I was begining to think you were not going to update this anymore.I'm glad you still are and can't wait for the next update alreay.I'm glad Inu still has Songo as a friend,it seems he is going to need that frienship soon.
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November 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Yay! you updated.This was a nice chapter. Im glad that someone is not taking Kagomes Shit anymore.! She deserves it after what she did.Update when you can!