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thanks you so much for updating I was worried their wasn't goig to be another chapter.
I loved that inuyasha put kagome in her place. I'm so happy to see inu give birth and kogo acting stupid when the time came. I hope theirs a somemore chapters I can wait just not a year that just streching it. Well I guess I wont ask for a squeal even thought all of us would want to know what going on with the clan.

ladytokyo

Wow,the last chapter was just great.You said you had no beta but you did great with the last chapter.Though some of the sentences were a little off it was still easy to follow and very enjoyable.I know you said no sequel but an epilog would be a nice finish to it.After a long but good story I'm sure you are wanting a break but I for one can't wait to see what else you come up with.
Very nice story..........pat yourself on the back

This is such a wonderful story *sigh* I actually cried on some of the chapters U.U...Yes, I'm a real sucker for angst. I read on your A/N's that you lost your Beta Reader. I would be happy to Beta for you if you would like. Also, if you need any ideas just ask. My email is kagenoshiseisai@aol.com and my AIM Screen name is KagenoshiSeisai. I'm usually online between the hours of 10pm to 3 am Eastern. Let me know if you want me to help! Later.

Hey please tell me your going to update soon?! this is a great story. I really don't like Kagome and you portray here the way I see her. I'm so happy that she's where she belong face first in poo. Kagome really no better than Kikyou, well she wrost than Kikyou I was excited reading this whole story. Kogo's a idiot but he's getting better. So now that his friends, and bitch are back in the picture and is coming to some understanding. Whats going to happen with Sesshomaru? I'm so happy this is a M-P I love thoughs and twins. Ok you can tell me I wont tell anyone else I promise. What the sex of the pups? I hope the first born is a boy! sorry I just so happy. I love the last chapter Inuyasha needs this to help heal. And I would be upset at all if she loses her life or a body part, Just make sure she pay even more and she suffer. I do have something to say. when you write you skip words, please fix that I really notice it in chapter 33 and 34. Thanks for reading my review and please update again. I need to see what happens next. Oh I have one question how Inu going to give birth? and feed it? see things I gotta know. I love all you writings. UPDATE!!!!K
ladytokyo aka shivonne

I'm glad to see it was said outright to her that she was the one who killed his baby. Now I just want to see her reaction to that.

As for the chapter, I'm glad to see it came a lot quicker than the last. It did have grammatical/spelling errors in it, but I'd just have someone check it over to fix those. Overall it was a pretty good update and I hope the next one comes soon, along with Kagome's reaction to the direct knowledge that she murdered an innocent child and almost took Inuyasha with it.

ok i am happy to finally taste another great chapter. its about time inu put kagome in her place, she needed it and i think inu needed the closure as well. cant wait it find out how kouga will reac to it and with the pups on their way that shuld be interesting. cant wait to read more so update soon XD

Chapt. 34
Hoturo is sneaky! She found a way to protect Inuyasha's friends that keep them from the pack and the winter storm. The barrier around the jewel was a great idea! Hope it keeps Kagome from using it too. Can't wait to see how Hoturo sends Kagome packing back home with the jewel, permanently! Woo - hoo !!! Go Inuyasha!! Finally he gets to put Kagome in her place - buried in manure up to her eyeballs...lol For the purpose of this fiction she is perfectly shown for what she is; a controller and a manipulator - and as stupid as all get out...lol Thanks for a fun read - looking forward to the pups birth!

ALright!!1 A new chapter!And it was worth the wait,I'm so glad InuYasha got to tell what he thought of her.Boy,is Kougo going to be mad when he finds him though,wondering if he is going to get a chance at Kagome.I can't wait for the pups this should be good.Really great job on this story so far!

haha, Kagome+ cow dung= priceless.

I feel pretty bad for Kouga though, poor guy. Inuyasha keep putting him into near panic-attacks everytime he runs off. I can just see it now... Kouga running through the halls screaming like a mad man, "Iun-chan! Iun-chan! where have you gone! You can't keep doing this to me, it's bad for my blood pressure!" haha

You know I was just thinking about how I wished I could read an update on Lost Hopes and bang, like magic it was there! Haha. Finally, Inyasha got to put Kagome in her place. When I read ch. 33 I was shocked and slightly annoyed that she was going to be staying, but ch.34 cleared all of that up. I'm looking forward to seeing how all of this will end.