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for Face Down

by OokamiJudge

person Peya Luna
schedule November 28, 2009 at 12:00 AM
the concept of the 3 alternating pov´s is interesting and its all in all well written, but the plot is just downright illogical. kagome could easily sit inu into oblivion, return home to the well+block it so he can´t follow, kouga would kill inu WAY before he could do real damage and wouldn´t just stand beside watching and most of all you gave not the slightest clue as to why inu abuses her...sorry, but this story just doesn´t make sense
person Little Jack 2
schedule November 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
That's so sad at the end,where Kagome was killed by the one she loves.
person Anonymous
schedule November 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
In response to the other review, Inu is dog. To be half inu, it means he is half dog. Inuyasha is an INU-hanyou.

Oh, and while I didn't care for the subject matter, this story was well written.
person Tokaia
schedule October 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Hanyu= Hanyou
Since= sense

Half inu = half demon. Last I checked, Inu Yasha wasn't half inu. He was half demon. To say that he's a half inu is to suggest that he's half some other demon.

Unusual story. Even though I didn't care for the subject matter, it is unuque.