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Hey, you have the makings of a really good story line, but your grammar and spelling are terrible. I don't mean to be mean, but half the time I couldn't tell what you were trying to write. Try getting someone to proof-read it for you before you publish it. It would really help your story. Good job though. Update soon ^____^.

Hi there!

i'm a big fan of ayamexkouga so i'm glad somebody is writing a fic about them.

While I like this fic, i would recommend that you proof read more and make use of the dictionary.

There were a few mistakes, such as singular/plural (wolfes rather than wolves), and spelling issues.

in case you're new to english, i have to say that the overall fic is still very cute.

-Haruko

I think that your idea is very creative, and you have gotten off to a good start. First person point of view can be a little challenging... lol... I would know from writing August. ^_~ But keep up the good work, and remember not to rush things. I learned that the hard way... lol. Keep doing a good job and thank you for leaving me reviews for August. ^_~

I love your story. I just love Kouga and Ayame pairings.Update please