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July 29, 2014 at 12:00 AM
This was an interesting story and I wish there was more because I'd like to have been able to see where it was going & what was going to happen. I was a bit confused in the beginning because it started off stating that it was taking place after Naraku had been defeated but then right after Kagome had asked everyone to go to her time & come to the concert it stated that everyone in the group was still worried about Naraku & this would be the break that they needed...
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June 23, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I really enjoy this story. I hope you post more soon.
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February 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Loves it!! Nice work!!!!
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February 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This story is really different and very interesting. The Kagome/Kikyou friendship has been nice to read, though the Kagome/Inuyasha/Kikyou relationships have been hard to define. (Which is just the way the are, right?) The Kagome/Kouga/Ayame realtionships have added a very interesting factor to the whole equation, too. And I like the way you used Kouga and Ayame's interaction serve as a point in kagome's thoughts and fears about being with Sesshoumaru. I like this!
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February 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I loved the story. I hope you update soon, I want to see what happens next.
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October 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Souta is NOT Kagome's onii-san. The terms doesn't simply mean brother, but 'older brother'. As Souta is Kagome younger sibling, the term would be 'otouto'! If you are going to use Japanese terms, you need to make sure that you have them right. A simple slip up can end up saying something that you might not mean to say and can be embarassing if not worse.
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October 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Hello ! Your story is nicely written, with only some big mistakes in vocabulary (but I'm french, so...),only, I find it too "gentle" and I don't understand the plot very well. Aren't the characters a little to "flat" ? Well, Inuyasha is mean, that's a change, and I hope all will be allright between each others. You've chosen good pairings ! Good luck to continue !
Bonjour de France,
Merely Truth
Bonjour de France,
Merely Truth
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October 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
loved it
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October 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I liked this story; it was cute! I particularly like the part that Inu Yasha got sat out of a tree (haha, baka). (Not that I hate Inu or anything, but it was just funny.) Keep up the story. I can't wait to read the rest of it.
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October 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Great start. Update soon. Can't wait to see if Kikyou can be brought to a live body and what happens at the concert.