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for Soul Consumption

by Seren1tyStar01

person Anon
schedule October 19, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wow! What an amazing story. Very well written, and no grammar mistakes that I caught. As far as your change in writing style between the two chapters, they both work good, but I like the first better. It's like reading the story twice, but not a the same time.
person Pastel
schedule October 19, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I love it! I hope that Sango and Kagome see each other again and they gossip about Sesshoumaru. Update please.
person TheBlackCrow
schedule October 19, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Hi Hi!!!

Oh Gods!! This is so AmAzInG!!!!!!!!! xD
I love to see this beautiful, romantic and so in love new side of Sesshomaru! ;D
And the scenes you descrive are flawless, sensible, and more importantly HOT ;D
Anyway, Do you think you could make a some-what interlude in between next chapter about how does Sesshy feels about all of this; 'cause second chapter was all Kagome centered... So... Lets wait and see what comes out ne? ^_^
Gods!! I can NOT wait to see how will the Inu-gang react to all of this news... mainly Inuyasha's expression... wonders if he'll feel guilty..? ... ¬¬ --- To be honest, I don't give a damn. He deserves all of that and more for hurting Kagome [thiught I'm sure Sess will give him a piece of his mind if Yashie-Chan tries something funny with Kags.. o.O]; however, I have to give some credit to inunoy , because if not for his careless-ness That beautiful situation between our newly mates wouldn't have happened... or taken a hell lot more time to do so ^_^

Oh Gods... I think I overdid my self this time... o.O SO I better leave before I kill the few brain-cells that are still consious in my brain xD
So, hope see you soon
Be$h!7º$H..! 2 U(^.^)
Bye BYes
person AIdeen
schedule October 19, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I love it!! Please up-date soon again!!! Very good!!
schedule October 19, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This is one hell of a great story! I can't wait for you to update again, when ever you do get the chance.

I wonder how Inu Yasha will react? Or Sango and Miroku? Ohh, the endless possibilities!

Until we meet again.
person Angie
schedule October 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I really think this story has great potential, you must update it soon,

ohh and i liked the other stlye of writing better than this, b/c then you knew what seesho was thinking...lol yup UPDATE SOON!
person kerya
schedule October 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
this is an absolutley wonderful story!!!^_^
sesshomaru is confused at first...arguing with, well himself. reading him doing that is the funniest thing i read in awhile!! you should deffinitly keep this one going!
-kerya-
person CapriaStar
schedule October 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I so love this story. All I can think of is Carly Simon's "That's The Way I've Always Heard It Should Be". It is just the perfect marriage of the Sessshomaru/Kagome dynamic. I can't wait to see were you decide to take the story.
person Metis
schedule October 12, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Very nice! I hope they have lots of Inuyoukai pups (they're cuter and less unstable than hanyou). heh. As for continuing, go for it if you want. I'm just grateful for this oneshot. Inuyasha going to be immature about it. Big surprise. 9_9
schedule October 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Damn! That was one hot fic!

I would like to see a continuation on this story. Or maybe events that led up to it, ie: their thoughts, possible actions, that kind of thing. But those are only ideas/suggestions.

Until we meet again.