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November 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Awesome chapter I have been waiting for you to update. Your talent amazes me and your ability to produce top quality work is fantastic. YOU beta “Virtual World” and I thought that story was great before. Now it is fantastic. The author should be proud of themselves for creating such great stories. They are lucky to have someone as talented as you as their beta. Your work is marvelous and completely unique. Great work you have something I only dream of having!!!
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November 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oooohhhh! That was just plain evil....;( Please update soon. I can't wait to find out who it was.
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November 12, 2006 at 12:00 AM
this story is a-ma-zing!please continue. : ]
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November 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I LOVE THIS STORY!!! HURRY and update ::NOW:: sorry just my inu side PLEASE I'M BEGGING YOU TO UPDATE ::wimpers PLEASE:: anyway will inuyasha forget about kikyo??
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November 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
great story please update soon
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November 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I loved the story. Please update soon. I certainly was not disappointed. I think that Sess and Inu need to be close as brothers should be.
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November 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wow! Really good! I can't wait for the next chapter!
I like how Kagome and Inuyasha seem to instinctively know the Inu tongue. ANd poor Shippo, little kit didn't know what to do. I can't wait to read about their training, or will you skip over that and get to the part where they can fight really well now.
Maybe Kagome can pick up a new "trick" from her mating, like how she may aquire demon speed, or how she can combine her powers with Sesshomaru's. Just ideas.
Until we meet again.
I like how Kagome and Inuyasha seem to instinctively know the Inu tongue. ANd poor Shippo, little kit didn't know what to do. I can't wait to read about their training, or will you skip over that and get to the part where they can fight really well now.
Maybe Kagome can pick up a new "trick" from her mating, like how she may aquire demon speed, or how she can combine her powers with Sesshomaru's. Just ideas.
Until we meet again.
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October 24, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Bravo!! Absolutely fantastic. Lemons are hard to write but you have mastered it well. The story is hawt! Keep up the great work and I will stick around. Ja ne!
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October 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This is definately hot and well written, but I'd like to offer a bit of helpful criticism -- try not to use "Gods" so much, it's repetative and distracting; otherwise, nice start.
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October 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Great! Very tastefully done, and a great read! Nice job!