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for Soul Consumption

by Seren1tyStar01

person Destiny3692
schedule December 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
i don't appriciate this just leaveing a cliffy like that but its a good story just make the person behind her kikyo haha or whatever just please update.xd
person lunarcat12
schedule December 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
intense chapter. loved it. i was a little confused for awhile but i think i know whats going on now. cant wait to see who the foe is that makes kagome know true fear. dieing to know how the whole story goes and cant wait for the next chapter. update soon.
person Kawaii Kilala
schedule December 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This is great, I can't wait for you ot up-date! So please UP-DATE SOON!
Thanks! Maybe...if you update soon anyways....
And you should make it a hideous and ungly beast, like very ugly and stuff, and afterwards, you should have Kagome and her birdy friend survive and them teleport away from Sesshomaru, and stuff...yeah that would so rock, then she could find out that her 'mom' isn't really her mom, and that shes really a mix breed like from that one story...a miko demon I think thats what she was...
NE ways! UP_DATE SOON!
(srry if i was rambling...lol)
TTYL; (maybe...)
megan
person Metis
schedule December 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
At last I come back to this story. I am happy you decided to continue it, and also thrilled that she can understand him. As far as I know, no other story has granted her that gift after bonding. What a great idea! She'll need it when dealing with her pups (hopefully full Inu, pretty pretty PLEASE!). As for POV, I've always preferred third person, but if not I'll take his over hers most times. Great story!
person Metis
schedule December 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Ah, nice. I love your use of the Inu language and how it helps to communicate. It seems that Sess has matured and grown some more.
person Metis
schedule December 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Ah, nice. I love your use of the Inu language and how it helps to communicate. It seems that Sess has matured and grown some more.
person Metis
schedule December 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Nice twist with InuYasha. And my, isn't she hasty. Young, stupid, and impulsive. Can't she allow him a moment of doubt? He has been alone for a long time.
person Metis
schedule December 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Alright, she had a reason. Still needs to mature though.
person Megan Consoer
schedule December 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
person articfire69
schedule November 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
great story update soon,please?????