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I usually stay away from Kagome and Fluffy pairings. Not my kind of thing. I got curious about your story, loved every minute of it. I didn't find it confusing at all. I think it's great. Please don't give up on it. I personally can't wait for you to continue it. Thanks for a great read.

you updated! :) been waiting for this one for awhile. really interesting chapter. must be weird meeting yourself. poor shippo can't even come near his mother. sesshy will take him in eventually i hope. sounds like the story just entered a new level. a twist and turns revealed. can't wait to see what happens. keep writing. i love this story. update soon!

Update Women lol I must say I hooked on this fic was going to quit once it started getting ridiculously confusing but I stuck it through and found that I do like your style and I couldn't wait for more. But I do have a question how many hours, years, etc has it passed since she has been with celiene. you implied awhile with the question of if shippo will have grown and if sango would be pregnant when they just got married so yea could you answer that one for me please. Keep up the great work ! update

Arry

wow that was great .... please update soon ... later for now

angel

Well, that chapter had a LOT of information to digest. That must have taken you forever to write. I liked her little interlude with Sesshoumaru and his explanation of what her actions with Inuyasha meant to him. Yay! I'm glad he marked her again. So, what will he go back to now that he's gone again? I'm going to have to go back and re-read this story to refresh my memory. Celine's revelation to her about how Inuyasha had been holding her back was kind of sad. I really don't think he would have done it intentionally, though, -- he's not that bright. Heh heh! But the thought that Sango, Miroku, and Kaede may have done the same thing is really, truly sad. I look forward to her training being over and her return to everyone and seeing what the fallout is.

Well, I like your story. I haven't found it to be confusing in the least. And I like the way you have your chapters set up, one in one character's POV, and the next in the other's POV. Besides which, it is your story, so you should write it the way you want. If others have a problem reading/understanding it, then this story just is not for them. Kudos on a job well done, and I am looking forward to the next chapters.

Why do we have to know every point of view about the same situation? It would be clearer if you had everyone's point of view mixed into the situation as it happens. It doesn't make since to rewrite the same event 3 different times giving them there own Chapter. I would like to know what happens after an event instead of having to wait to chapter.

wow!
talk about a deep one, I honestly can't wait for the next chapter
I have enjoyed what I have read so dar, so keep up the good work

Fubuki

All I can say is wow that is one of the bestI have ever read.I love that you speak from both points of view. I 'm stil sweating from the heat. Please write more.

... DAAAAAAAAAH!!.... crap... I was all excited and now i have to wait for he next chapter... Oh well, get some sleep!!