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for The Ruse

by Crescentgray

person entropy9
schedule October 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
that was too cute. Jaken probably does think a little too highly of himself, but with the way that he grovels and kisses Sesshoumaru's ass, he probably knows his place. still it's cute to imagine him thinking all this to himself. great job, writhe bitches, have a nice day!
entorpy9
person Omokage
schedule October 15, 2006 at 12:00 AM
lol, that last part almost made me snort then I just let it go and laughed
Sesshoumaru-kun is just so funny
that blank story of yours sure is something
person swasdiva (not signed in)
schedule October 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oh my ...God.

Was that a train that just ran over me, or your twist at the end? Holy crap...sooo did not see that coming!

I must say, I almost expected Jaken to start speaking like Yoda. I imagine him busting a cap in much the same fashion.

"Kill you I will. The real Lord of the West I am!"

Well, Jaken, you now officially rock.