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for Infatuation of a cold heart

by putusername

person Nikkie23534
schedule October 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
That was awesome! Please update soon, It's a great story!~ B reading U!
person Tsukiyomi
schedule October 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I'm too lazy to log in right now. lol I love this story! More soon please!
person acr
schedule October 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
The concept is interesting, but the story is very rough. You misspell "slave" as "salve" about half the time. Also, your Inuyasha is totally OOC. Just cuz you want him as the Uke doesn't mean he has to be a totally helpless wimp.