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October 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Can't wait!! update soon!!
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October 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
a VERY interesting beginning!! im surprised to see that Inuyasha doesnt fight back AT ALL! can't wait for the next chapter. ganbatte!
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October 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I can't wait for the next chapter. Although there are mistakes i still love it
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October 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
*cries* ...sniff...sniff...I was crying while reading through this first chapter it's just soo moving and poor Inuyasha...please continue to update I love it..and can't wait to see what's next and hopefully Sesshoumaru be able to tell Inyasha his feelings soon and love him the way it should be..
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October 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Interesting start. I would love to see where this goes - There were a few spelling errors in the second half, but not many. Other than that, it looks like a well written chapter :)
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October 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
more please!
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October 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I liked it and I really hope that you'd be one of those quick updaters without losing the quality of your writing style, 'cuz I can't wait for more.
I only have a question: how old is InuYasha exactly?
I only have a question: how old is InuYasha exactly?
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October 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
WOW! I really like where you'e going with this, it sounds like a really good idea dn I've never read something like before. Poor InuYasha though, he can't see that Seshy really cares about him, but that just adds to the story anyway. Please update soon, I want to see what happens when they get home!
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October 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
That was awesome! I can't wait to read more! It was brilliantly done, and I totally love how you ran with the idea of the challenge. YOSH!!!!!
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October 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wow...That was just...WOW.... I cant wait for more.
THanks.
THanks.