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for Infatuation of a cold heart

by putusername

person sma_orlando
schedule December 23, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Please finish this good story.
person gen
schedule December 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
er... do you think you might be updating this for as a December gift?
frankly, i'm hoping to read Sess exploding from keeping everything in ....
(after centuries, no less)

at any rate, have a wonderful december
person ren
schedule December 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
yay! I wasn't expecting subtext, but I loved it!!

person N.C.
schedule December 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wow, I love this story, and just for the story line...

The way you write is abit rough, but you manage to make the me feel waht the charecters feel. I understand their actions and I feel waht they feel. I love how you even managed to create symbols in your story; like the stars to Inuyasha's mother. It's brilliant! The scene of Inuyasha's mother dying was so amazing.

I love it!
person Jay FicLover
schedule December 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Hehe. it's wonderful. *swoons like the hentai girl that she is* You could add this scene if you want:

Inuyasha overhears Sesshoumaru getting it one with a demon whore and wonders why he feels jealous. When they're finished, the whore asks Sesshoumaru "Who is Inuyasha? You always call that name when you come". Sesshoumaru gets up angrily and tells her to shut up, while on the other side of the door Inuyasha is absolulely dumbstruck.
person gen
schedule November 24, 2006 at 12:00 AM
i can hardly wait for Sess's explosion, whenever it comes
i mean when you hold it for a couple of centuries (you did say centuries, yes?)
it's bound to be quite fiery....

and i'm thinking there's bound to be more pain in Inu's life
which in turn would torture el loco sessho
(sorry i couldnt resist)

hope you get the time and energy to update....
person Sekre
schedule November 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Ahhh, the sexual tension xP
person Jester08
schedule November 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Great story. Keep up the work and update soon please!! I really can't wait till they finally tell each other their feelings! ^_^
person Anon
schedule November 20, 2006 at 12:00 AM
update soon
person Death Angel
schedule November 20, 2006 at 12:00 AM
That's evil how you left it. update soon. this story is so totally wicked!!!!