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It's quite an interesting concept, but where's the rest? Really eager to see where this goes. Btw, don't be too concerned about no beta, your writing is wonderful. Don't change a thing.

omg i have really liked reading the begining of ur story, it is really interesting yet i have noticed that u have not updated in a while, which i hope that u will do so eventually. as for this being ur first story, u r really good with ur detailed plot and description, keep it up.

I'm enjoyed this first chapter. It was enjoyable! Mm. There is nothing left to say other then.. I praise you.

oh my gosh, OMFG!! I LOVE THIS STORY!! i like how you introduced it, how it's being played out,EVERYTHING!! please, i BEG of you, update soon! this is a great story! i can't wait to see what'll happen next.

You said in the author's note that this was your first fanfiction? I'm very impressed. The style of writing hooked me very fast and I was waiting for more after each sentence. The flow between paragraphs and scenes is also very easy to follow and goes very nicely. The theme of divorce and personal change is something that most can relate to, and I love how you've expressed so much in such a short chapter (an introduction chapter really). I will of course be waiting on edge to read more. ^^

Yup, this is interesting...Keep it going, it's great. ^_^

Great story plot, can't wait to read more!

I like it keep it up, i cant wait to see what happens next