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😂😂😂😂😂 omg that ending was epic, lmao

XD ROTFLMAO!!!! 'Thank you and good night!' You ended this story on SUCH a hilarious note!!!!!!!!! Great job!!!!!!!

Lol.... Wow, it was hot and funny as hell. Loved it!! ^_^

To Sir sticky fingerz and anyone else who suspects that the original idea of this story isn't mine.

When there are hundreds of thousands of people from all over the world writing fanfiction, or writing altogether, there are bound to happen some similarities with storylines or something of the kind. I have not read "Spider bite" or million other works of fanfiction, but if I had I would still have published my story as it is. I do not approve of plagiarism in any way and it is certainly not the case here.


- Kuronohime

MORE! MORE!! MORE!!!

next chapter please!

ok hoe, you need to write another chapter because there hasnt even been an orgasm yet! And you need to stop putting in your little crap it the stories. if you have something to say save it till the end of the story. yeah, so when you said that inuyasha liked her smell, then put in that stupid little blurb it COMPLETELY ruined it!!! damn ass whole. but i like the constant lemon... and i need more. Im seriously sitting here reading it and shoving a long, fat dildo in my hot, wet pussy at the same this im like dripping all over the place, but still just like kaggy and inu i have yet to reach my orgasm so im going to try to calm my self down and go take a really cold shower. and its all because you are a fucking ass whole!!! lol

Sexy stuff there! New chapter soon, please? I really enjoy your writing style-lot's of humor, which not everyone can pull off (describing Kagome's "smell", “become one in flesh” lol). Keep it up!

How could you be so cruel and end it like that ,you mean mean person.Update SOON!!!!So far its a kick ass story.

Oh come on!!! How can you leave me hanging (sobbing hysterically), I can only pray that you update soon.